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Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 4:58:30 PM

SlaveRobert66

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From previous suggestions on the "shelf life" forum I edited my profile. Please let me know if You like. Thanks in advance !

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 5:06:49 PM

UllrsIshtar

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Much better.

I like the video you have on there now.

The only section I'd add if I where you was an explanation of why you're looking for what you're looking for. What you're expecting to get out to it, what draws you to it.
This doesn't need to be a porn script (even if that's what you want) but a short description of the needs you'd expect to be met through this relationship, so that any woman reading what you're offering her would know whether or not she'd actually meet your needs. Even if you're perfect for her, she won't be perfect for you, and the relationship won't work out if needs are mutually fulfilled.

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 5:11:00 PM

LadyConstanze

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I would take out the being raised under female authority, that is something you can bring up later when you talk, too much of a zinger for a first introduction...

Try:

I have been brought up to respect women! I open doors , pull chairs and any thing else I can do to make women’s lives easier.

Then take out the stuff with the paycheck and that she would take over your home and finances, you don't want to attract everybody who's looking for a free ride and you don't want somebody who is your dome for a limited amount of time and then walks away with most of your earthly possessions...

How about you are looking for a meaningful relationship where you can serve the woman in all aspects and you are open to TPE and it is a given that you also do domestic duties. Then write a bit more about what you like to do, what you enjoy, playing guitar, walks, reading... Mention your interests, be more of a person somebody can engage with

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 5:58:18 PM

SlaveRobert66

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Thank You Ladies ! I made some of the changes and will add to the profile this weekend. Good Night ! Thanks again very much !

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 7:22:23 PM

seekingreality

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It's OK but a little dry. It basically doesn't say much other than you are financially secure and want a 24-7 relationship. You might give more of a sense of your non-BDSM self.

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 7:58:57 PM

BambiBoi

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Listen Honey,

If I was a dominant woman and I saw your profile I would feel like you would take whatever tumbleweed bumps along, so long as it is Femdom, Transdom, or 2xFemdom. Make her feel special, like she's the one. Make her say "Wow... we align pretty well. He's looking for something just like me! I'll view his page like twice and hope he gets the hint that I want him because I'm not going to write Bambiboi a message on his Cougarlife account." Wait.. Lost my train of thought...

You might be the submissive, but you are looking for the right one. That makes you the predator, not the prey. There's got to be more that you want than someone who will have boobs and live at your pool. Figure out what it is and mention it. Forging a relationship is ongoing, but this is the one opportunity you have to filter out any dealbreakers you might have. Smoker? Drug use? Disease free? Likes pets? Allergic to cats? Does she have to be single (as opposed to married)? Are there any kinks that you need in a relationship, ones that you will be unsatisfied without? Do you want her to bring order and structure to your life or pain and humiliation? Or both? Easiest way to do this is to look at 5 Domme's profiles that you would like to mail you. And, if you may do so truthfully, repeat back in your profile what is important. Bill Cosby said it best.

quote:

ORIGINAL: Bill-"Pudding Pops"-Cosby
Women don't want to hear what you think. Women want to hear what they think -- in a deeper voice.

Also, try an arpeggio for Wonderful Tonight. Pluck the top string of each chord, then pluck each cleanly one at a time: 4-5-6-5-4. You do that right and you can throw out all your lube.

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RE: Rate My Profile ... - 8/9/2012 8:08:28 PM

FrostedFlake

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I couldn't understand one word, but it has beat you can dance to, so I give it a 5.

Seriously, I think it conveys a positive feeling, a good glimpse and is better than the vast majority of profiles I have looked at.

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