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Who owns who? - 9/9/2012 3:30:56 AM   
oldswordfighter


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TOTAL POWER EXCHANGE
OR
REQUIEM FOR AN ANGEL
(Based on a true story)
Who has power over who?…
Who owns who? Said the honest Master to the perfect slave…
You own me completely and with no limits! Said the perfect slave to the honest Master. And she believed it completely and without limits. And from that moment she became the center of his world.
They had talked only a few times when she asked to be his property. When they met she opened herself up to him immediately and without hesitation and within minutes of first setting eyes on her he bound her and began exploring her young, beautiful body and her deliciously exotic and super intelligent mind… She was perfect… And she was his completely and without limits.
So he rejoiced in her and used her, and used her, and used her in all the ways his imagination could devise. And she never, ever, ever, ever failed him or hesitated or even showed one sign of jealousy when he had her help him use other women. He learned what she was, and what she was capable of, beyond all question and so he valued her beyond all measure and cherished her. He showered her with everything he could find that pleased her, but always she was most pleased by pleasing him. He was old and grey bearded and had the look of a hard man and she was young and beautiful. She was perfect but the world is a hard and wicked place and it hates perfection… He knew before she gave herself to him that she needed protection so he protected her. Like all things beautiful and wonderful she was followed by great evil and her destiny was to be destroyed by it. He was an old and proven warrior and he prayed to God for the strength to protect her and God gave him the power to protect and provide for her for years. They were unimaginably wonderful years. He had been a powerful warrior and a great adventurer and while he had enjoyed many things beyond the imaginations of ordinary men he had also endured so much pain, suffering and betrayal that he was weary and bitter and become a hard, hard man. She was like a cool and welcoming pool to a man parched from an unforgiving desert wasteland. And so he dived into her cool waters and drifted in her deliciously all consuming embrace. Drifting in her soft, compelling current into the sort of earthly paradise that men dream of. She completely dedicated herself to caring for him, serving him, pleasuring him and being his constant companion. She maintained his household and one of his special joys was her skill in preparing his food and how she served him during his meals. Hovering there in her delicious nakedness, filling his drink and serving him condiments. She would cook each course separately so that each was served freshly steaming and she would eat simpler food later. They shared fine dining and exotic foods, art, literature, music, entertainment, travel, hard drink and loose women. She LOVED using women and soon became an experienced Alpha slave. Even as she only called her Master, Master her girls only called her Alpha But her favorite girl called her Princess Alpha because of how her Master always spoiled her so … She had been violated as a child and like many women cursed with this she loved dominating other women and found women that needed to be violated and used them in those ways to her great joy. She never grinned so great a grin as when she had some woman writhing in orgasmic bondage. He positively wallowed in the fever hot joys of watching her and using the many women she used by giving them to him to use… She was perfect… Unimaginably perfect… And he owned her completely and without limits.
Alas however, like all things beautiful and wonderful she was followed by great evil and her destiny was to be destroyed by it. After far too few years she suddenly became very, very, very sick. She began having seizures and almost completely lost control of her beautiful body. She had been such a perfect, no limits slave that he was driven to be a no limits Master. He wheeled her around and bathed her and fed her and did everything he could to ease her suffering but she just kept getting worse. She suffered horribly for months and months. He gave up everything to take care of her and be there for her. His possessions and properties meant nothing to him compared to even a few more hours of sitting by her bed watching her breathe. But she begged him to let her die and so he had to let go. He was destroyed. He was a warrior and so he could not give up on life but he was only a hollow fragment, acting out his beliefs and trying to do good things every way he could but he barely felt anything. He did all the things that she would have wanted him to do. He chased and used women but he could not bring himself to love again and no woman ever came close to his perfect slave. He drew himself farther and farther from life an eventually he found a good death and threw himself into it as a good warrior should. As he eagerly passed from life to death his thoughts were only of her. And as he so frantically hoped she was faithfully waiting for him at the end of that great grey tunnel. They rejoined and rejoiced and once again he felt joy. All there was to them was each other and the warm and gentle light of God. So God asks the honest Master, now that you are reunited who owns who. The honest Master replied, saying that he had lived life believing that God spoke and created the world and that living in truth was to live within the word of God. The truth oh lord my God is pure and simple. Even as I owned her body and her mind absolutely and without limits she owns my soul absolutely and without limits. And so God replied, saying There…My beautiful daughter, You see that giving is all powerful. By giving yourself absolutely you gained everything that he is. So God gave the soul of the honest Master to the soul of his perfect slave to do with as she pleased. So she used him as she had always used him. By serving him and pleasuring him in any way she could because it always pleased her best to please him. So God gave them a special corner of heaven where they could glow like a jewel in the firmament and God kept them as one of his most special treasures.
Dedicated to my dear, dead, princess Alpha… 11/28/1986 TO 8/13/2012…Rest in peace and wait for me my eternal love
In grief… oldswordfighter


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RE: Who owns who? - 11/27/2012 4:26:25 PM   
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It's a sad and beautiful story, my dear Friend, and a powerful lesson...
Having been fortunate to meet and watch you and your beautiful slave, I remembered you often during my journeys, with a joy and a smile.
I add my grief to yours and pray that your souls eventually meet.

- frezi

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RE: Who owns who? - 2/20/2013 1:16:59 AM   
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Thanks for posting.

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RE: Who owns who? - 2/21/2013 11:39:58 AM   
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Really touching... thank you for sharing.

A concept I have always thought about... by giving, we take; by taking, you give...

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RE: Who owns who? - 3/1/2013 8:50:23 AM   
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wow, so beautiful, touched my heart.

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RE: Who owns who? - 5/11/2013 7:00:55 AM   
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It is "Who owns whom" Whom, whom, whom

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RE: Who owns who? - 5/12/2013 9:52:25 PM   
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That was very unique, thank you..

I expected at most a well written version of "the slave owns the heart of the Master" or some variation of things I had read before..the mortality aspect I did not expect. It was very touching. And still other angles spoke to me, like this: " He had been a powerful warrior and a great adventurer and while he had enjoyed many things beyond the imaginations of ordinary men he had also endured so much pain, suffering and betrayal that he was weary and bitter and become a hard, hard man. She was like a cool and welcoming pool to a man parched from an unforgiving desert wasteland. And so he dived into her cool waters and drifted in her deliciously all consuming embrace."

That goes farther than my own journey has been; I haven't become quite a "hard hard man" in the sense you mean, but, to a lesser degree, affected by the cold hard cynical world all around? Affected by, how to put it tactfully, by more than a small number of less than stable folk one naturally comes into contact with on such sites? The answers are yes - to some extent I've felt those things; to some extent, aren't we all? Have many positive experiences and times and moods and positive things in my life, but for those other times, what a beautiful image, of the "cool waters" to soothe you...can definitely see how that would be just what the doctor ordered, or what the soul needs :-)

Thanks again for the story and, my condolences to you..



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