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warm... - 4/3/2004 3:50:32 PM

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In this world so far from whole,
in time coldness 'comes the norm.
But there are those who nurture their soul,
and more, over time, become warm.

All are taught the same lessons,
all are marked by the knife.
Some turn cold as Hessians,
some learn warmth and light.

I traveled in a distant land,
where none could speak my name.
Illuminated by a proffered hand,
I saw at once we were the same.

Sorrow falls from her fingers,
into the keys and away.
Returns as phosphor and lingers,
From those who feel the same way.

When they've discounted all you've done,
and mean to do you harm,
remember you're not the only one,
hang onto your heart, and stay warm.

Lawrence, 1995

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RE: warm... - 4/4/2004 1:21:22 AM

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I like that!

Thanks for sharing.

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RE: warm... - 4/4/2004 1:35:37 PM

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aaahhh, this explains the signature!

Nicely done....

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RE: warm... - 4/4/2004 8:50:58 PM

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Thank you both.

I actually wrote that for a friend in a compuserve section 12 chatroom, christmas eve, 1995. there were three of us in there, having a pity party, and I wrote it, almost exatly as it stands, in one pass.

I think it may be the best thing I ever wrote...

stay warm,
Lawrence

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RE: warm... - 4/9/2004 1:26:00 AM

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very nice

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RE: warm... - 5/3/2004 5:18:17 PM

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! BadaBUMP!

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RE: warm... - 5/3/2004 6:45:01 PM

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This is one to be shared with someone special in the evening with candle light and warm tea on the sofa under a shared afghan...you touch the reader on the inside, Lawrence...

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RE: warm... - 5/5/2004 5:43:27 PM

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M. Beckett-

Thank you. Of all the things I've written, it remains my favorite.

Stay warm,
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