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(POEM) INTROSPECTION-WHO AM I or WHO ARE YOU? - 3/24/2013 4:20:10 AM   
subbiedude


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This poem is written by me, i was inspired by a special person whom i had a long time online Mistress-Sub relationship, i never saw that person, nor heard, once I asked that person "Who are you?" and that's how this poem originated. feel free to comment, let me know what you think, Oh one more thing, i am not a professional writer.

INTROSPECTION

Who am I? , Who are you?
Why are we here?
The greats have asked those questions
But no one knows the answers
Life is a cycle of beginning & end
What begins should end, what ends should begin

In midst of beginning & end, we seek happiness
The Pursuit of happiness
Sometimes we get what we deserve
Other times we get what we don’t deserve
But who decides what I deserve?
Can we call that entity "The God"
Who is he or who is she or what is it

In my dreams I asked few Questions
Why Sky is blue?
A voice said "Because I want it to be"
Why Earth Rotates?
Again the voice said "Because I want it to be"
Why do we have four seasons?
Again the voice said "Because I want it to be"
I asked why I was born?
Again the voice said "Because I want it to be"
Finally I asked who are you?
That voice went silent & simply smiled!!!!!!


In one of the holy books god has said
"You do your work, let me decide the fruits"
I did my work, perhaps it was not upto the mark
I never got the fruits
But again god told me to never give up
But I asked the god
"How can I give up something which I don’t have?"
But the god said "You have it, just apply your heart"
These words were invigorating to my mind
But again I was foolish enough to ask
Who are you?
I never got the reply....

Few people submit for self gratification
Few others submit as a fantasy
Few other do it for adventure & fun
While only few handful people submit selflessly
Why did I submit?
Ironically I have no answer
I only ask questions
How foolish I am?

People can delete me from their mind
They can block me
They can reject me
But no one can delete memories from my mind
They will always be fresh & lively
If anyone can delete it, it has to be me
The Question is why would you block or reject
Someone who seek good wishes to you?
Only god can answer

At times we feel presence of our loved ones even though
They are no longer in this material world
We feel air which we cannot see, at the same time
Which we cannot afford to live without
When hopes start to fade
When we start to breakdown
When we feel like crying
When we are helpless
We seek you; we seek "THE GOD"
Where are you? Who are you ?
Only you can answer

We have flaws, all of us do
No one is perfect
Perhaps that’s why we seek you
Because you are perfect
You decide what is good to me
You decide what is good to society
You will uphold the Righteousness
But at the end, can I accuse you of
Dictatorship?
How much pathetic can we get

If a sun which is millions of miles away
Can influence the lives in this planet
Why can’t a soul which is only few
Hundred miles away can influence me?
It’s time for Introspection
But both my heart & mind will always ask
Who are you? Where are you?
Perhaps only you can answer

Finally I would say
Everything in this world is not
About give & take
There are few things which you can give
But you cannot take (Example: Pain)
But one can take pain to bring smile
On someone’s face
That’s the power of Submission
I will only get stronger from here on
THAT’S IT!!!!!!!
-
Subbiedude





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