Darkcast -> RE: Would anyone be willing to critique my profile? (5/20/2013 7:06:44 PM)
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ORIGINAL: MsEloquence I like it. I do have a quibble though. The last sentence reads either as though you expect women to write you first (which isn't very likely), or as if you're desperate to hear from anyone at all. So cut that sentence. If you mean that you'd love to make friends, try saying something like "I look forward to getting to know people of any and all orientations as friends" Fixed :-) Thanks I like it. Now GO GET 'EM, tiger. So many subs think that Doms are sitting on CM, doing nothing but checking profiles. Use some search filters and see what comes up. Since you read the faqs, you have an idea of how to approach. Here's what I mean. You write: "I'm currently seeking a domme that's local to the SWFL area (from Marco Island to Port Charlotte) for a long terms d/s relationship." OKAY, but are you really, really seeking -OR- as I suspect...... "I'm currently waiting for a domme that's local to the SWFL area (from Marco Island to Port Charlotte) to contact me for for a long terms d/s relationship." Those that seek, shall find..... obvious Biblical reference - you can look up Chapter & Verse. LOL! Thanks. I actually have been using the filters. The real issue I've been coming across is that a lot of dommes in my area seem to be financial, pro, or haven't logged in since 2011. I'm not saying all of them as I've come across lifestyle dommes in the area. It just seems my area isn't as big as others.
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