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Darkness - 11/12/2004 1:53:08 PM   
blushes4u


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She enters the room slowly and jumps slightly as the door creaks. "Hello" she whispers "Anyone there?" The room is dark and she feels her way around to find a light switch but to no avail. She didn't understand it. He was suppose to be here!

Who is he you ask? The man she had for months talked to online, on the phone...and a few times in real life. The last time they talked was in a restaurant. He was very mysterious and gave her directions to meet him the following weekend. The only instructions he gave her was to enter the house, follow the candles that were lit to the big oak door.

Well here she was, but where was he? "Hello!" she said a little louder and as she stepped forward she felt something brush against her neck. She turned quickly and as she did this she felt a hand cover her mouth, while the other hand took her wrist and led her further into the room. The hand pushed her gently down, till the back of her knees felt something and she fell backwards...onto a bed. The smell of musk came nearer as a voice whispered "Quiet my little one...it is I". His hand moved away from her mouth. "Tonite I want to make you completely mine. If you do not wish this, if you want to leave ...now is the time to tell me." In her mind she could only sense a slight chill of fear, but she had wanted to be his for the longest time, so she relaxed and nodded her head. "Yes then allow me to take control now..." and he began to undress her. Her heart was pounding and her head was swimming with not only fear, but excitement. His hands so gently undoing the buttons on her blouse, slowly...methodically, until finally he had pulled it off of her, leaving her breast open to his desires. His hands brushed against her nipples, his thumbs circling her globes until they hardened with passion. A moan escaped her lips as his fingers pinched and pulled them, then a startled cry as a pinch clamped down on first one nipple and then the other. His hand reached up to caress her cheek, letting her know everything was going to be fine, then moved back down to pull on the chain attached to the pinching nipples...she cried out again.

His hands then slowly moved down to unbutton her skirt and lower it until they were free, then the slip was removed and all that she had on now was her panties, white, crisp and by now a little damp. His hands slowly moved to the waist band and lowered the panties, his fingers brushing against her clit and lips before lowering her panties completely off. She felt his hand attach something to her ankles that spread her open wide. Now she was open to him, her body was for his pleasure and she was gladly giving her body to him. He moved away from her, the darkness was something she could not bear, she yelled out for him but he did not respond...Where did he go? Her heart now pounding even faster, and she began to struggle to look for him....then saw from the door there was a figure, with a candle glowing to emit light into the darkness. There he stood and she let out a sigh of relief. He moved to her, the candle in one hand and what looked like a flogger in the other. Her body shuddered with anticipation. He put the candle on the nightstand next to the bed and she saw on the nightstand many things she had only seen pictures of. She wondered if they were going to be used on her this night, and as she looked at him, saw the gleam in his eyes, she had no doubt that they would be.

(This was only a test....if you liked this then i may add more. If not well use your imagination to finish the story yourself *smiles*)

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RE: Darkness - 11/12/2004 3:57:45 PM   
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Ok you know thats not FAIR!!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE! pretty please?????




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RE: Darkness - 11/12/2004 9:18:33 PM   
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Well ill tell ya if we dont see more... there could be a riot in here lol
Nice piece send more

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RE: Darkness - 11/14/2004 4:49:38 AM   
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[She wondered if they were going to be used on her this night, and as she looked at him, saw the gleam in his eyes, she had no doubt that they would be.]

He looked down at her, so innocent, so eager to please. Gently enveloping her body, he turned her face down on the bed. "My lil one...for so long now you have expressed your fear of the darkness. I have seen it now and after tonight, darkness will only mean joy and pleasure to you" With that said he placed a blindfold over her eyes. He bound her hands together tightly, and placed pillows under her tummy so that her derrier was lifted somewhat.

In the darkness, her body shook....fear always present when there was no light. She listened for his movements, for any sound that would let her know he was still there and that she was safe. Then she felt something brush down her back. The very tips of a flogger, playing havock with her senses. As soon as her mind wondered when that first strike would touch her soul, she felt the kiss of the flogger on her back. Not wanting to make any sound, she held back her moaning, but not for very long. One after the other continued to make its mark on her body, from her back down to the backs of her legs, until finally a shriek of pain echoed in the room. Sweat was pouring from her forehead and tears were streaking down her face. Then it stopped, there was no more strikes to her body, just a tingling from the slashes and welts that formed, and the dew that formed on her lower extremities. She was wet!! She felt so embarassed that such pain would cause her to have an orgasm!!! He too must have noticed, for she felt his fingers touching her, dragging some of the juices onto the welts causing her to groan with embarassement. His movements were soft and there was no sound from his lips.

As her breathing became even, she suddenly gasped again as she felt something cold touch the marks that had caused her to cum so freely. What was it? It moved down her body, comforting the stinging, then she felt it wedging between her legs. It was wet and cold...ice? Yess Ice!!! Slowly he pried her lips open with the ice, her body shivering in excitement. Then it inched its way inside her, then back out. This continuous motion had her humping up and down until the ice was shoved all the way inside her. As the ice started to melt inside her, he turned her over, letting her soreness press against soft silky sheets. He removed the clamps quickly, causing her to scream loudly. His fingers massaging and letting the blood rush back. Then nothing...quiet again. No sound, no touching...only the feel of the ice melting....melting...her mind fixed only on this sensation alone.

Then another shriek of pain came from her lips as something hot, hot burning on her breast. She twisted and turned trying to douse this pain, but could not. Another and another burning sensation caused her body to slightly arch upwards, but being unable to move she could only lay there and endure the pain. The burning continued to move down her body, racking her with pain and anguish until it stopped. The fingers that carressed her breasts were now moving to her vagina...flicking and rubbing and pressing her clit. He could sense her closeness and she felt another burning .....soooo hot...soooo on fire!! How she so wished now for the coldness of the ice to douse this burning flame that was torching her senses. Then a voice so soft, yet so demanding, spoke "Do not cum yet my lil one". Not cum? How could she "not cum"? He was causing her body to awaken to feelings she had not had is so many years and he is telling her not to cum?? Trying to think of something other then the flame that was lit, she could only quiver and shake. The burning continued for so long that she thought she was going to pass out.

Her vagina, where the ice had melted a long time by now, was numb inside but still tingled with such new desires. Then she felt it, His hardness...pressing against her clit down to the very being that wanted it to be. She wanted to wrap her legs around him and force him to enter her, but she couldn't and it bugged the heck out of her. Oh god why doesn't he take me? Sensing her needs, he pushed into her slightly, watching her body shiver. "Tell your Master what you want lil one" Her mind became cloudy. 'What I want? I want him to fuck me!!! I need to feel his control over me!! I need...want ....Him' Her body writhing in sexual desire, she was able to force from her lips "You....I want You...need You Master" and with that said, his hardness entered her fully and completely. All the marks on her body, the numbness, the heat...just added to her passion as she moved to meet each thrust with anticipation. "Do not cum yet lil one" He said through his groans. Then she felt him...felt him throbbing inside her, jerking inside her...until his juices were planted inside her. Her mind going crazy trying not to cum with all her efforts. As he pulled out, she moaned in despair. Worse then the darkness was the inability, no being denied the orgasm that was building inside her, she cried.

"Soon little one...soon you will cum and you will not be able to stop* he said, chuckling in amusement at her perdicament.


~~~~~well thats all i have in me for now...to all those reading ,,,,this is purely fantasy, this one has never experienced any of these things and doesn't even know if these things are possible..they are just fantasies in her mind~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~






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RE: Darkness - 11/14/2004 5:41:28 AM   
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Thank you for sharing and yes some of it may be possible and sometimes not.

It depends on how much you can take and who you find to share it with.

And also if you want to make the fantasy real or not or keep it inside you as a fantasy.




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RE: Darkness - 11/14/2004 2:20:51 PM   
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Thanks, it is something that i hope to experience...hot and cold ...*shivers and blushes* :)

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RE: Darkness - 11/14/2004 10:06:37 PM   
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I may be a submissive dear..

But reading your work makes me want to take you where you wish to go.


Slowly very very slowly
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RE: Darkness - 11/15/2004 12:38:02 AM   
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Hmm not much to say except that was really good - well done - it got me thinking and a little turned on Almost like a fantasy for me too.............

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RE: Darkness - 11/16/2004 2:33:45 PM   
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oh hell could ya possibly write more soon PLEASE lol
it was awesome
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