TieMeInKnottss
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Ok...you asked so... First, the reference to "fakes"... To me that is always a red-flag..nobody is LOOKING for fakes so it is redundant. Two..the "younger woman" will turn off many in your actual age range. I would specify the range...ie "seeking women between 20-40 yrs old". Three..eliminate the reference to "bi-female a plus". Combined with the "younger woman" thing it sounds liike it is all about sex...FINALLY..my personal pet peeve that usually turns me off immediately-spelling errors. Proofread or use a computer program to double check the spelling... welcome and good luck
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