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Music of Pain - 11/17/2004 10:38:25 AM

TwistedTrouble

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Music Of Pain

A kane
strong and steady
a single-tail
snap and sting
a flogger
kissing like an angel
yet making Siren's sing
the kane
starts the rhythm
steady hard and true
the single tail
sets nerves alight
in every color n hue
then the flogger
picks up the music
though heard by just a few
the moans
are beginning
the song must be sung
the cries
become verses
made as pure as the Sun
the tremors
are the finale
for the Siren is Done

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RE: Music of Pain - 11/17/2004 2:06:41 PM

blushes4u

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Very nice, thank you for sharing!!

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RE: Music of Pain - 11/17/2004 4:31:25 PM

fairymist

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I enjoyed this poem very much. I am new to the lifestyle in Gor. Just thought I'd drop you a line and say well done.

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RE: Music of Pain - 11/17/2004 7:31:38 PM

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Such a talented group of people here on the boards.

Thank you for sharing.

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It's because I can!

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RE: Music of Pain - 11/18/2004 12:56:07 AM

TwistedTrouble

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thank you all
fairy you know i've wanted to go into the gor side of things just looking for someone to take me through it
Twisted

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