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Anguish - 11/23/2004 9:25:17 AM   
chainedpoet


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I would lay there at night
Full of fear,
my soul and mind fight
we shed many a tear.
Your love has strayed
someone taken your heart,
from the beginning
I knew we should part.
It seems no one loves
not in the true sense,
building our walls
erecting our fence.
Today is the day
you appeared in my life,
I will find a way
to make you my wife.
Anguish was here
I know from the start,
you will not stay
I have nobody's heart.
I used to cry
cause nobody loved me,
I always try
again we will see.
Now can I take
the gift from above?
The tears that I cry
Because somebody does.


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RE: Anguish - 11/23/2004 10:23:46 PM   
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quote:

REPOSE TO chainedpoets verse
ANGUISH



Anguished face
full of fright
Living in fear
Living in night
As the vision
of your soul
passes thru
My being
I sence no love
I gain no serene
But you whisped
thru My body and
tore at My heart
Now pounding at
My minds door
letting Anguish
set in and swirl
in the sess pool
of a cheating tart
I feel such a fool
to have let you
creep right on in
My care and caress
you made it a sin
Now I sit bitterly torn
and your only thought
about with insight
Get out of My darkness
and let Me again see light.
Where I can find yet
another to Anguish over.
For chainedpoet
MistressDREAD™®©11/24/04





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RE: Anguish - 11/24/2004 3:25:05 AM   
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Thank you both for sharing how beautiful!



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RE: Anguish - 11/24/2004 7:36:24 AM   
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Bravo!!!! Mistress *smile*

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