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Kuraria -> "Tear of A slave" (11/24/2004 12:40:24 AM)

Title: "Tear of A slave"

He looked at me today
Felt the locks of my hair
Called for His drink of ale
He lifted my chin, looked into my eyes
There he saw only my desire
He knew that I wanted only to please
Looking me over he dismissed me
One could only feel rejected
She peeked to him when she return to the furs
He had eyes only for his drink
Was she not pleasing enough
Had she not served him well
The owner of the Inn calls
Girl crawls to him fearing the Masters displeasure
He allowed her to serve him and smiled to this girl
She peeked to him and wept silently
One tear falling to his boot
Girl kisses the spot the tear fell
He dismisses her but this time she is happy
Her belly warm and her heat restored
All from the tear of a slave.




theroebabe -> RE: "Tear of A slave" (11/24/2004 3:31:17 AM)


Thank you for sharing it gives an insight to me of others.





Kuraria -> RE: "Tear of A slave" (11/24/2004 3:46:50 AM)

I'm not a slave however but I did write this as I saw their life.




chainedpoet -> RE: "Tear of A slave" (11/24/2004 7:47:49 AM)

I am not a slave but I am a servant and sub.Natural submision and servitude is a wonderful thing when those being served receive it naturaly.The servant knows in T/their heart when the Master is pleased.When not however our hearts bleed in anguish...wondering what it is or how it is that we have failed.
Your words totally hit the nail on the head....Thank You.




cariad -> RE: "Tear of A slave" (11/24/2004 11:11:02 AM)

You captured the feelings of a slave so very well in this poem......thank You [:)]

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