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profile description does not sound right???? - 12/13/2014 11:19:23 AM

DPMSSUB

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ok I'm a DOM with a bisexual woman who can dominate another woman
so it says DOM/switch couple
I guess its right lol
comment?????

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RE: profile description does not sound right???? - 12/13/2014 12:07:55 PM

DarkSteven

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Comment.

1. Welcome to the forums!

2. The profile text sounds like she's throwing a fit. I'd tone it down.

3. The pronouns are all singular in the text. It sounds like you're not involved at all. If that's correct, I'd change it to a profile for a single woman and state in the text that she's owned but that you'd be a nonfactor.

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