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Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 7:44:48 AM

SirRajah2

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Have I run the course
missives flown back and forth,
now the words exhausted?
Now no longer worthy,
of your attention.
If this be true?
Be gentle to my heart,
speak so softly
that a quiet goodbye,
would ease the pain
of my languishing soul.

My heart goes out to all those
left high and dry by wannabe doms and subs

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 7:59:26 AM

crazyml

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Those lengthy emails into which you poured your heart
Which you crafted and revised,
Might have made for a promising start
but were likely ill-advised.

Don't imagine that she's the perfect one
Don't begin to think that you're set
Because, when all is said and done
This is the fucking internet

If she doesn't reply just let her free
It's the grown up thing to do

It's not that she's a "wannabe",
She's just not into you.

You'll bump into someone when the time is right,
Who recieves your missives with delight

Who responds to your entreaties with pure class
And will let you fuck her up the arse

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:20:41 AM

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wonderful just wonderful prose excellent thanks for the response.

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:21:48 AM

crazyml

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you're too kind

And I hope it didn't come across as too snarky, it wasn't intended just as a dig.

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:22:38 AM

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And it would have been poetry, not prose, had you caved in and used the American ass instead of English arse.

< Message edited by mnottertail -- 2/7/2015 8:23:11 AM >

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:24:38 AM

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Do you think I should publish a translated version?

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:47:55 AM

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No! I didn't find it as a dig, more of a compliment than anything else. I thank you again for your kind words.

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RE: Waiting for a response - 2/7/2015 8:50:24 AM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: crazyml

Do you think I should publish a translated version?

Sure. And one in Nigerian too, please.

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