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Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 6/25/2015 5:25:41 PM

HadrienAndLianna

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Hello everyone,

We are a couple collaborating on writing a bdms themed vampire story. We first wrote it for each other in a very rough form, then decided to try to rewrite and share it, this is the result. We appreciate any comments, likes or flames.

There are heavy themes, the first sex scene of the series is a borderline rape, so if you don't like forced situation, it might not be for you, and it's not all out erotica so it takes a bit to get to the steamy parts, but we hope it will be worth it.

You can find the story here.

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 6/27/2015 8:01:18 PM

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First chapter was a bit long winded, but it's obvious you put a lot of work into this and I was drawn into it by the second chapter and I loved the sex scene. Please do more.

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 6/27/2015 8:46:27 PM

HadrienAndLianna

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Thanks for the constructive criticism, we know the first chapter has a lot of content to digest in it, and we're trying to think of ways to edit it to make it flow better but we haven't found the solution yet. Glad you enjoyed the read though, and hope you will read more. Next chapter should be up in a few days, then maybe next weekend for another chapter. Then we get into another sex scene chapter, no firm ETA on that due to the complex nature of co-writing this.

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 6/28/2015 11:22:43 AM

HadrienAndLianna

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A new chapter is up, no sex in this one but quite a lot of action and and a bit of blood and gore. Enjoy!

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 8/12/2015 7:32:46 PM

HadrienAndLianna

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New chapters have been published, including a new sex scene. Enjoy!

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 8/31/2015 12:11:41 AM

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I am really enjoying this read thanks.

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 9/13/2015 9:23:36 AM

HadrienAndLianna

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Thanks Lavender, new chapters have been posted, including a new sex scene. Enjoy!

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 10/17/2015 12:03:07 PM

HadrienAndLianna

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New chapters of CKH have been published, enjoy the read, some important reveals happen in the recent chapters.

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RE: Our amateur bdsm themed vampire story - 10/28/2015 8:15:52 PM

HadrienAndLianna

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CKH has reached the top 15 most popular novels on Booksie for the 30 and 90 days periods! We're really happy about that, thanks a lot to our readers for helping us reach that first page! We'd like to extend an invitation to the others to give us a try so we can do even better and aim for the top spot! CKH is now also available on Wattpad. Thanks for reading!

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