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Jds86 -> Need some advice (9/20/2016 10:22:32 PM)

I was just wondering if someone can take a look at my profile, and give me some feedback on it. I'm not the best at writing profiles, and wanting to know if there is anything i should add, or take away from it. Thanks in advance :)



OsideGirl -> RE: Need some advice (9/20/2016 10:27:15 PM)

Over all, I think it's good. I would take out the stuff at the end about the nudes, etc. Keep it positive. The only other thing would be to put a little bit in about your philosophies on D/s and what your seek in a power dynamic...without getting to far into the kink.

Good luck in your search.



BitaTruble -> RE: Need some advice (9/21/2016 2:10:23 AM)

I agree with Oside and I would take out the stuff about hating drama. Nice photo..maybe add one or two more.



SDFemDom4cuck -> RE: Need some advice (9/21/2016 2:44:00 AM)

Personal contact information is not allowed on your profile per TOS so you might want to remove that first thing. I would also suggest breaking up into paragraphs, a wall of text bunched all together is hard to read. A nice mix of Vanilla interests and kink on your preferences list is always good. It gives someone approaching you an ice breaker of sorts without focusing on a specific kink. Otherwise, a nice profile.



NookieNotes -> RE: Need some advice (9/21/2016 2:46:04 AM)

1. Put blank lines between paragraphs. Will make it easier to read.

2. Agreed, take out the line about drama. No negativity. Find a way to keep it positive.

3. Take this out:

quote:

I'm not sure what else to say at this point. I don't want to give it all away then what would we talk about lol. I know it's on just about every profile on here, but I'm not a creep or anything. I'm not on here to get nudes, or have some weird agenda.


It reads like you are unsure and not confident. Be sure and confident. You are a dominant.

I agree about adding some words about what kind of dominant you are, and adding more photos. I don't suggest a cock shot at all.

Good luck!



Jds86 -> RE: Need some advice (9/21/2016 5:21:56 PM)

Thanks alot for the pointers. Some really great points I dident think about.



DarkSteven -> RE: Need some advice (9/21/2016 9:47:24 PM)

Fella, I've been reviewing profiles for over a decade, and yours is damn good.

Your writing style shows you to be direct and not very complicated. You have two general paragraphs about kinky you, then a paragraph about vanilla you.

Your pic again shows you as down to earth, with the cap and a dog. Your last paragraph implies that your daughter means a lot to you.

The impression I get is of a solid guy, who relationships mean a lot to.



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