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You got the rules? - 9/23/2016 1:15:07 PM   
DaBotz


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So, you got it all?

In the rest of the house, on the whole property, you are and always will be a quest.

I am your host, bound to my hospitality duties, and very happy to oblige.

You climb that step, enter this wooden floor, and you WILL behave as a sex slave, and shall abide to the rules of this... how you called it? Ah,

Temple to my overbearing personality.

In deference to both your youth and lack of experience, and owing to the peculiar nature of our relationship, I will not ask for actual servitude, from you, neither sexual nor sadomasochistic.

I may ask some basic assistance, like having you retrieve a tool from a rack or take the ropes and place them apart, for me to fix them after the session, but nothing more.

You are required to oblige to these simple and harmless chores, as promptly and as dedicatedly as possible - no more than that.

However, in deference to the women whose sessions you will observe, you WILL never climb that step dressed in a way "inappropriate" to a sex slave, and you will endeavour on this floor as much as possible as one, or you will be dismissed and sent back to your home immediately.

So, before entering the floor, you will undress and then wear the wrist and ankle cuffs, the collar and the chastity belt, the short white socks and, on occasions when the dominée is someone that may recognize you - like your English teacher, what's her name? Mrs. Marksham? Yes, her - the leather hood.

I will not require you to wear the customary dildo, inside the chastity belt; should you try it out, you must be able to not cum before asking and receiving explicit permission from me.

So, you better leave that thing alone, for now - it would make you cum in five minutes, top.

Once over this floor, you will join that corner, sit on your legs like the women in the photos I showed you, and wait for orders.

You will not snickle, giggle or worse laugh, no matter what happens.

These women may have accepted to be presented to a fellow sister slave, for her enlightenment, but most of them could not bear to be laughed at by a bratty girl.

By the end of the month, you should be able to tell if you are effectively interested in this stuff, or not.

If you are, depending on what side you fancy more, I have friends who can take you in and help with your training.

As I told you, given our rapport it would be very unwise for me to teach you the domineering arts, and extremely inappropriate to train you as a sub. This glimpse is all that I can reasonably offer.

So,
You got the rules?

The girl fixes the shortish man for something more than a second, before answering:

Uncle B., aren't you a tad too serious? Come on? Isn't this just a glorified RPG?

The man blushes a tiny little bit, before retorting -

You are the one that wanted to know how this stuff works, Nina.

I was just dumb enough to let you convince me that it could be fun, to show you the ropes for a while... Now, get in gear, dear.

The girl is startled -

Oh... already? Now? Today? I mean, I am not ready! I thought wel started Saturday.


Oh, and... put the hood on! Finally, don't talk, no matter what.

What? Why?... Who is she?

Hurry! Your mother's going to enter that door in ten minutes, max.

What?

Yes, she always comes a bit earlier, when you aren't at home.

Mom? Mom? My Mom? What the fuck, Uuuncle!!!!

The bulky man smiles... The kid is right, after all. This is fun.

Someone knocks on the door, just as Nina fumbles on her own trousers...

A lot of fun, indeed.




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Truth is, I am not English nor American, nor a native of any English-speaking culture... yet, every time that I re-read this I find something to fix.

I would be very glad if you pointed me out the most glaring, glaring, subtle and "maybe" mistakes.



Thanks,

_DB


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RE: You got the rules? - 11/14/2016 8:57:41 AM   
CaptHeisenberg


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I've fixed this for you in most part. Ok?



"So, you got it all"?

"In the rest of the house, on the whole property, you are and always will be a quest???

"I am your host, bound to my hospitality duties, and very happy to oblige"

"You climb that step, enter this wooden floor, and you WILL behave as a sex slave, and shall abide to the rules of this... how you called it? Ah,

'Temple to my overbearing personality'".

"In deference to both your youth and lack of experience, and owing to the peculiar nature of our relationship, I will not ask for actual servitude, from you, either sexual or sadomasochistic".

"I may ask for some basic assistance, like having you retrieve a tool from a rack or take the ropes and place them apart, for me to fix them after the session, but nothing more".

"You are required to oblige me in these simple and harmless chores, as promptly and (with as much dedication)dedicatedly as possible - no more than that".

"However, in deference to the women whose sessions you will observe, you WILL (will .Capitalize NEVER)never climb that step dressed in a way "inappropriate" to a sex slave, and your behaviour will reflect one) on this floor as much as possible, or you will be dismissed and sent back to your home immediately".

"So, before entering the floor, you will undress and then wear the wrist and ankle cuffs, the collar and the chastity belt, the short white socks and, on occasions when the dominée is someone that may recognize you - like your English teacher, what's her name? Mrs. Marksham? Yes, her - the leather hood".

"I will not require you to wear the customary dildo, inside the chastity belt; should you try it out, you must be able to not cum before asking and receiving explicit permission from me".

So, you better leave that thing alone, for now - it would make you cum in five minutes, top(s).

Once on this floor, you will join that corner, sit on your legs like the women in the photos I showed you, and wait for orders.

You will not snicker,giggle or laugh, no matter what happens.

These women may have accepted to be presented to a fellow sister slave, for her enlightenment, but most of them could not bear to be laughed at by a bratty girl.

By the end of the month, you should be able to tell if you are effectively interested in this stuff, or not.

If you are , I have friends who can take you in and help with your training depending what side interests you more.

As I told you, given our rapport it would be very unwise for me to teach you the domineering arts, and extremely inappropriate to train you as a sub. This glimpse is all that I can reasonably offer.

So,
You got the rules?

The girl fixes the shortish man for something more than a second, before answering:

"Uncle B., aren't you a tad too serious? Come on? Isn't this just a glorified RPG"?

The man blushes a tiny little bit, before retorting -

"You are the one that wanted to know how this stuff works, Nina".

I was just dumb enough to let you convince me that it could be fun, to show you the ropes for a while... Now, get in gear, dear.

The girl is startled -

"Oh... already? Now? Today? I mean, I am not ready! I thought wel started Saturday.?"


"Oh, and... put the hood on! Finally, don't talk, no matter what".

"What? Why?... Who is she"?

"Hurry! Your mother's going to enter that door in ten minutes, max".

"What"?

"Yes, she always comes a bit earlier, when you aren't at home".

"Mom? Mom? My Mom? What the fuck, Uuuncle"!

The bulky man smiles... The kid is right, after all. This is fun.

Someone knocks on the door, just as Nina fumbles on her own trousers...

A lot of fun, indeed.



----------------------------------- ---------




Truth is, I am not English nor American, nor a native of any English-speaking culture... yet, every time that I re-read this I find something to fix.

I would be very glad if you pointed me out the most glaring, glaring, subtle and "maybe" mistakes.



Thanks,

_DB


_____________________________

"Once upon a time, I was much older than today."

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