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Young man eating cherries - 2/23/2017 2:54:01 PM   
doraSalonica


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Every so often, a mature woman will become the target of a younger man. Supposedly, the older woman will teach the younger man all the little secrets concerning the art of love. Or so the myth goes.
Well, the exact opposite thing happened to Rosie, when she met Daniel. She should have seen it coming, what with all the crazy stuff that had come her way in life, ever since she could remember herself. It was already obvious, to her at least, that she had been singled out for great things, which included all the exceptions to every frigging rule of existence.
She should have seen it coming, but she didn't. And now, there she was, getting ready to meet a younger man, without the slightest premonition that she would soon find herself in the most unexpected predicament, against all odds. So much for myths.
Daniel approached Rosie on facebook.

He lived in Tel Aviv and he was a musician; he played the piano for a jazz band and he was studying for a post-graduate degree in music. He was planning to come to Thessaloniki, Rosie's hometown in the north of Greece, for a few days, in order to do some research. In the mornings he would work on his thesis, the subject of which was connected to the music of Thessaloniki, but there would be time in the evenings to combine business with pleasure and get to know some “locals”, as he put it.
Rosie was one of the “locals” and she was quite willing to meet him, since she liked making new friends. The young man was polite, was fluent in English and seemed really interesting. They met in the afternoon, in front of the statue of Alexander the Great, by the sea, where Rosie usually walked her dog. She wanted their first date to take place in an informal environment and the beach of Thessaloniki was ideal for that. They sat on the grass, while Rosie's dog, a half-breed Labrador, played nearby.
There was good chemistry between them from the very start. They both liked jazz.

“Isn't it interesting,” Rosie said, “how the various, seemingly disparate, truths of life struggle to come together into a unified whole? Whereas jazz musicians can hold on to the main musical phrase, eventhough they allow the notes to play in the most amazing and unexpected musical adventures. Until at last they achieve a glorious final harmony. How I wish life could also achieve this harmony...”

“It is not all that hard,” Daniel said with a sly smile. “I might have the chance to show you a thing or two that I have learned.”

Rosie did not know what he meant, but she was enjoying the conversation. The young man had an exceptional mind and a truly liberal spirit. Rosie had a feeling that even if she told him that she enjoyed making love with baboons, hanging upside down from tree branches, he would simply nod understandingly. She could tell that he was flirting with her, very discreetly. Yet Rosie kept her distance, because of the great age difference between them. She was twenty years older than him. She did not envision anything happening between them, mainly because she did not think that she could really offer him anything. He was young, attractive, intelligent, with his whole life ahead. He could jump onto any wild horse that came his way and ride away in the distance, under the sun of the Middle East. Why should this man need an old mangy horse like her? He could do anything he wanted, literally.

What he wanted to do was take her out to dinner. He did not pressurize her at all. He said it, let it hang between them and allowed her to decide where and when.
What harm in that? He was so easy-going and knew so many things. Rosie accepted his invitation for that same evening. They dropped off the dog at Rosie's place and they went to eat at the new restaurant, the Garden of Thermaikos, opposite the White Tower. They found a nice little table there and everything went swimmingly.
After their dinner, Rosie suddenly remembered that she had to rush to the super market, before closing time, as she had run out of dog food. Daniel said he would accompany her. While Rosie shopped at the dog-food section, Daniel browsed around the greengrocer’s. When she returned, she found the young man putting cherries in a paper bag.

“I could not resist,” he said. “They look so appealing...”

“Oh, no, don't buy them. I have better ones at home. A friend of mine brought them for me from the countryside. My cherries are much better than these. You will see.”

They went back home, fed the dog, and since it was still early, just past nine o' clock, they decided to continue their night on the town. Rosie washed some cherries, put them in a clean plastic bag and gave it to Daniel. They were great cherries, bright red, fat and juicy.

"They are all for you,” she said. “I do not like cherries.”

“You don't? Why not?”

“I am not sure. Maybe because they have a stone in the middle. I am afraid I might break my teeth.”

They bought some beers and went to Iktinou street, a youthful hangout in the city center, where they sat on a bench. Every now and then, Daniel would take a cherry out of the bag and eat it, holding the discarded stones in his palm. He was the image of nonchalance, as he sat on the bench, drinking his beer and eating his cherries, taking care not to litter the city where he was but a visitor. At some point, he turned to Rosie and asked her the thing he probably wanted to ask her from the start:

“Do you like younger men, Rosie?”

“I find age to be immaterial,” she said.

“I am relieved to hear that. You know, I hardly ever go with younger girls. They lack this distillation of character. Only a mature woman can approach sex as a natural thing, without the need for any promises. You know what I mean. Will you respect me in the morning? Will you love me for ever? It's stupid. If these things are to happen, they will happen. Why force them? If you want to fuck, just fuck. Live for today, fuck for today, leave love for tomorrow.”

Perhaps it was not the right time for Rosie to tell him that she did not know the first thing about love, let alone making love. Her erotic life was a fumbling of sorts, mostly in the dark, literally and metaphorically. But she did not disagree with what he said, in principle. She did not believe one can force love. So, when the young man invited Rosie back to the place he was renting, she accepted his invitation.
Rosie had no idea what would happen at his place, but she knew that something would happen. She had already decided that she liked him, had caved in, inwardly, was half kneeling and was ready - if the young man made the right moves.


But would he make them?


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RE: Young man eating cherries - 2/24/2017 11:55:50 AM   
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It was a very nice apartment, near the ancient agora. A small living room, a balcony overlooking the back street, a bathroom, a kitchen and a large bedroom with a double bed. Daniel’s choice of music for the night was Miles Davis.
The sweet sound of the trumpet was travelling through the open balcony door to the back streets and the balconies of the surrounding apartment buildings. Rosie sat in an armchair and took her paper fan out of her bag, as there was no air-conditioning. The young man went to the kitchen and whipped up a fruit salad, with bananas, peaches and apples, all cut in small, symmetrical pieces. He placed the cherries right in the middle.

“Isn't this great?” Rosie said. “Jazz, fruit, beer...”

Daniel did not waste any time at all.

“Will you show me your breasts? I have been thinking about them all night.” He sat comfortably on the couch and popped a cherry into his mouth. He had perfectly straight white teeth.

Rosie was not going to play hard to get. She would go through with this, if only out of curiosity.

“I will, but you must promise not to touch them”, she said.

“Promise.” Pop, another cherry.

“Should I pull my dress down or should I lift it up?” She was wearing a short, black dress, with a low neckline. Luckily, Daniel seemed to know precisely what he wanted.

“I want you to reach with your hands inside the dress and pull out each breast separately. As if you were taking a white dove in your palm and holding it tightly so that it would not fly away.”

Rosie complied. Her breasts were white, in comparison to the rest of her skin, which was tanned by the sun. Daniel seemed very pleased at the sight and popped one more cherry in his mouth.

Within seconds, Rosie had put her breasts back in and arranged her dress. She sat again in the armchair and started fanning herself like crazy.

“Why did you do that?” the young man asked. “I was enjoying the sight.”

“Because we have to clear up a few things first.”

Whenever Rosie felt insecure, she started the negotiations. She was scared. She recognized the feeling as fear, she almost relished in this recognition of fear. It was definitely fear. It was lurking in her bones and nestling in her neck, slithering up and down her spine, until it went and wound itself around the source of her pleasure, between her legs, like the snake of Eden. It sat and waited there patiently, to see what would happen next.

“What did you have in mind?” Rosie asked. “Do you want to show me how Israeli men make love? Or do you want me to show you how Greek women do it? What do you want?”

“The first one,” Daniel said and placed one more cherry in his mouth.

Rosie could not help but remember a phrase by Lacan, that had remained with her, probably because she could not understand it very well. “Che vuoi?” “What do you want?” is the question that best leads the subject to the path of his own desire.

“What do you usually like to do?” she insisted. With her paper fan she was trying to beat back the sweat that kept pouring out of her skin.

“I want to give you pleasure, while you give me pleasure too. Wouldn’t you like to give me pleasure, Rosie?”

She nodded. Her mouth was parched.

“What do you like, Rosie?”

“Oh, I don't know. I think everything...” She did not even know how she preferred her coffee. Some distillation of character...

“Is there something you do not like?” he insisted.

She hesitated, then blurted it out.

“I do not like penetration much.” What was she saying to the man? There is only one thing I do not like about sex: just sex! Well, she just didn't like it. She had no idea why. Like with the cherries.

“Interesting,” Daniel said. “I could have sworn that was the only thing missing from your life.”

Rosie looked at him sitting on the couch, eating cherries with his straight white teeth, smiling at her. She welcomed this feeling, this total lack of pressure.

So that was what they said and what they agreed upon, although Rosie was not quite certain as to what precisely they had agreed upon. But she felt they could move on. So they took turns in using the bathroom to freshen up and when all practical matters were out of the way, they both returned to the living room. Rosie stood in front of the young man, half naked, having removed the dress and the bra.

“I want to hold on to my underwear”, she said and Daniel nodded.

She was a bit uncertain about her course of action, because of the lack of haste on his part. She really wanted to have a reason to resist him, but his approach was completely different to what she was used to. Usually her lovers were hasty to the point of violence. But this man was so languid, that it relaxed her too.

“Can I touch your breasts now?” he asked.

“Yes.”

He caressed her breasts, praising their size and shape. Then he removed his clothes, revealing a surprisingly large, circumcised penis. He sat in the armchair and asked her to kneel in front of him. He took her breasts in his hands and brought them together. He created thus an unlikely fold of flesh, which he started using at once. He moved slowly, with a steady tempo, while he kept talking to Rosie with his disconcerting nonchalance, guiding her to move, up and down. Rosie had a strange sensation. It was as if his pleasure depended on her. He was giving her back a small measure of control, the sweet boy.

“Ride me with your breasts,” he kept saying, over and over again.

So it was all the other way round in the end. He was the horse, not Rosie. And she bobbed up and down, riding him with the white doves of her breasts, under the sun of the Middle East, toward the horizon of her freedom.

(to be continued)

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RE: Young man eating cherries - 2/24/2017 12:06:51 PM   
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Great read! :)

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RE: Young man eating cherries - 2/24/2017 12:34:28 PM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: Kat713

Great read! :)

Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it!

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RE: Young man eating cherries - 2/25/2017 5:53:59 AM   
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Daniel suddenly placed his hands gently on her arms and stopped her.

“Let us see now how small this cherry is and why you never use it.”

Her cherry...

The fear of penetration, a fear Rosie had tried unsuccessfully to overcome, for years on end, lifted its ugly head inside her again. But the young man was caressing her so softly and his voice was so reassuring, that her body eventually relaxed. She found herself lying on the floor in front of him. His delicate fingers were exploring the folds of her body. He did it so gently that Rosie soon forgot to be afraid. She felt relaxed as if she were lying under palm trees in the desert.

At that moment, Rosie realized that she was in the hands of a man who could, at that young age, already handle her in a very thoughtful, self-controlled way. There was no doubt that one day this young man would become a great lover.

“I will remove my underwear now,” Rosie said.

“Thank you,” Daniel said seriously, recognizing this as a token of trust.

The snake of fear had slithered away and was lurking in the far corner, looking at a woman who had become a young girl again and was about to discover what lay between her legs.

“May I...?” she asked tentatively and lowered her hands towards the part of her body that the man called cherry. She could not bring herself to say it, but the young man understood and nodded.

“You may. But you will be patient,” he said. His fingers were now moving in tiny circles on her body, in unison with the movements of her own fingers. They were both playing a different kind of jazz now, on the same musical phrase, at a tempo that kept escalating.

Rosie could not wait any longer. She had reached the abyss and the abyss was dark and sweet and calling her.

“Now?” Rosie asked and her voice sounded small.

“Not yet.”

She whimpered but reduced the tempo. She felt she would die if she did not -

“Now?” she asked again. The same small voice, a whisper. The abyss had opened up and was waiting for her. She wanted to be lost inside the abyss for ever, never to come back. She was part of the abyss.

“Just a little more. Be patient, baby.”

Daniel now increased the tempo to a difficult, almost painful crescendo. Rosie moaned in desperation. Oh, she would die, for sure.

“Now? Now? Now?” She could no longer breathe.

“Yes. Now,” said the young man softly.

The orgasm washed over her instantly. She plunged without hesitation into the black hole of her own desire. She experienced a series of blinding explosions of pleasure, each one stronger than the previous one. She was swimming in a liquid paradise, struggling to return to the surface. And it was the young man's smile, his white teeth, the light which guided her out of the abyss and back into the room.

When she came back to her senses, she was lying on the floor. She lifted her head and looked at the young man. He seemed very pleased. Rosie half-expected him to reach for another cherry.

But he had other things in mind. He helped her up and took her to the bedroom. He placed her lying on her back, near the edge of the bed, so he could enter her in the angle that seemed more convenient to him. He said he had noticed something peculiar, when he was caressing her before. It was not that she was too tight, no. The problem was a lack of depth. That was the paradox about Rosie: despite being the deepest abyss of pleasure, she was physically shallow. Perhaps that was the reason for her fear of penetration.

“Relax,” Daniel said. “I will not hurt you.”

He started pushing himself inside her, slowly, ever so slowly. Rosie moaned. A little more, a little more… Rosie was experiencing this piercing penetration in slow motion. The folly of flesh overwhelmed her. There was no defense left, none, no way to be saved. She abandoned the last remnants of her logic back in the young man's room and started travelling under his body, among the palm trees of her life's desert. She was travelling far and hours had passed, years perhaps, when she felt all of his largeness inside her. She started kissing his hands then, as they supported his weight on the bed, next to her head. She turned this way and that and kissed his hands around the wrists. He was now making love to her properly. Slowly, and then a little faster. And then slowly again. And then faster. Rosie started mumbling incoherent things, not knowing what she was saying. Daniel definitely did not know what she was saying, since it was all in Greek, Rosie’s mother tongue.

“No, don’t, please, no, oh God…”. She was speaking just for the sake of saying something, just so she would give vent to her madness, hoping the words would somehow keep her connected to reality and to logic. All in vain. She was lost, irrevocably. “Oh God, oh God...” Until...

“It is time now, baby,” Daniel said calmly.

And there, at long last, was the secret of the art of love, in front of her, in the flesh, offered to her as a postscript to her love life, now, in the years of maturity, by this young man. The secret is... to let go. In the hands of a man who never loses control, not even the last moment. For two people to make love, one has to open oneself to the other, to the desire of the other. Cue vuoi? What do you want? I want what you want. I want to want what you want. Rosie wanted with all of her heart to want what her lover wanted. The mirror of desire had been revealed to her in all its splendor, and she was standing in front of it. She was there at last, had arrived at her destination, after a difficult journey, which had lasted almost half a century.

Daniel brought their common pleasure to an end and lay down exhausted next to her, waiting for his breathing to become regular again. The next minute, Rosie began to cry. She was crying silently, while thick tears were rolling down her cheeks and onto her chest.

Why was she crying?

She was crying because she had lost her fear. She had lost a part of her, a part of her body and a part of her life, the thing that had kept her in a sort of unity all those years, the same way a musical phrase lends unity to a jazz song. She experienced the loss as if the connecting link of all priorities inside her had been gone. For a moment she felt alone. Empty.

Then she realized that this was nothing other than the experience of freedom. She was free, more free than she had ever been before. Free, until she could find new criteria, new rules for her internal universe. And she would. It would be a new hierarchy, not based on fear, but on desire. The other's desire.

Rosie immediately felt aroused again, just at the thought. Daniel was exhausted, but she had only just begun. Though she had no idea whether her fear would ever return again. She knew only one thing for a fact.

This young man had just taken her cherry. And great things were to come.

THE END


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RE: Young man eating cherries - 4/3/2017 11:16:34 PM   
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The secret is... to let go.


I found tears streaming down my face at that line. How powerful! Thank you.

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