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anitl3gal -> Not what it seems (12/13/2004 10:26:50 AM)

Dont be worried, I wrote this as a bit of a joke for a class as well, It's mostly humor and not really based on anything but a class assignment, But it's fun to share anyway.


Bliss


Holding my breath for one last second
I feel the tingling feeling
Relief came as a shock
My mind bubbled with this sensation.

It was no longer dry
But I couldn’t stop now
The sensation was perfect
I held my breath again as it came.

After it was done
I relaxed a bit
Stared often into space
That was the best Pepsi I ever drank.




~aj




t22tango -> RE: Not what it seems (12/13/2004 2:36:22 PM)

Hahaha, this just proves that there is more than one mind in the gutter along with me... LOL ~tango~




theroebabe -> RE: Not what it seems (12/13/2004 5:32:09 PM)


LOL That was great THANKS!





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