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Inside Me - 1/6/2005 1:58:10 PM

ForgottenBreath

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"Inside Me" by breath

Wrapped within a delicate frame
A woman stands, proud and willful
Her spirit soars higher than the eagle
Wits and Intellect sharp as the wolf
A more beautiful creature doesn't exist.
She is eager, yet cautious
Curious, yet fearful of her findings
Wild, yet the calm of the storm
Loved, and yet she often hates herself
Is she realistic or a dream?
Playful, yet wise beyond her years
Wanton, yet often the first to blush
Needy, yet able to stand on her own.
And yet there is a fire, an ember
Fanned by the heart and urged by the soul
To be taken, to be wanted, to be controlled.
A key to unlock those secret doors
Where fantasy lingers awaiting light
Chains and pain are more intriguing
Than the slow dullness of her existance
She hurts, she wants, she needs
The touch of a Man stronger than herself
And yet the coolness of lingering romance
has starved the flame of it's source.

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RE: Inside Me - 1/6/2005 4:29:20 PM

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Very interesting poem I like its flow but it feels like something was held back....otherwise most beautiful.

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Into the night sky I fly through distant lands and darkened streets... Up into the clouds to play and dance with the moon.....To the hearts of all and I say to you be true to they own heart.

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RE: Inside Me - 1/6/2005 5:22:08 PM

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Fantastic thank you and so true of submissive the pull they feel and the dreaded word . . .

PATIENCE i hate that word lol.

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It's because I can!

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