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Poem: Mental - 1/8/2005 3:06:24 PM

FangsNfeet

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You are mine
So kind
So devine
Vulnerable and fuckable is your mind

I tease your brain
To fuck you insane
My words strike you like a cane
I do it all to you in vein

For once I'm nice
Then swats I give you twice
Making you flentching
I cause for you to shudder
Keeping you guessing
In reply to me you studder

To you I am a riddle
To me you are a fiddle
Playing your mind pluck per pluck
Hearing you srceam "Oh FUCK! Oh FUCK!"

A slap to your cheek
A pinch to your breast
As your lips begin to leak
I call your beauty one big mess

Your "Why?" gives me pleasure
Your "Cry!" is such a treasure
My limits have no measure
With me you never get a full answer

Why do you stay?
Why don't you go?
You're an addict to my force of play
You love me this I know

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RE: Poem: Mental - 1/8/2005 3:16:39 PM

scarletrose

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Ahh addiction, what would the world be without it? I loved it thanks for sharing.

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RE: Poem: Mental - 1/8/2005 5:13:18 PM

DameDarkness

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that was just tooo cute.... ~giggles~

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RE: Poem: Mental - 1/8/2005 6:12:30 PM

ForgottenBreath

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Well written and very enjoyable. Thanks!

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RE: Poem: Mental - 1/8/2005 7:53:52 PM

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