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For All Eternity - 1/8/2005 6:16:35 PM

adoringbeauty

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Following my heart has been harder than it seems
You told me you would never hurt me
You said you'd never leave
I fell in love with you, I trusted you and i believed
that you would never make me feel alone, you'd never leave me alone
yet that's the way it seems to me
i feel neglected, i feel unloved
i want my happiness back
i want my dreams to come true
the dreams that matter
the dreams that i had of my life with you
i can never give up this fight
to keep you here
right here in my life
i want to know you
i want us to just be
the two people i dreamed of
For All Eternity.

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RE: For All Eternity - 1/9/2005 7:26:23 AM

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Hi and welcome to the forums at CM!

Sigh i know this feeling and live it, thanks for expressing it so well.

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RE: For All Eternity - 1/9/2005 12:04:47 PM

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Straight from the heart, beautiful.......

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RE: For All Eternity - 1/10/2005 1:33:31 PM

INSIDEYOURMIND

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Well written!

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RE: For All Eternity - 1/14/2005 7:37:09 PM

FangsNfeet

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a very nice poem indeed. Always a good way to get someones attention to say how you feel and that it's time to shape up or ship out.

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RE: For All Eternity - 4/19/2010 9:05:40 AM

Unlovedforever

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wipes tears from my eyes (haha again in this forum) : ) this is my fav I think.

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