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Spanked senses - 1/9/2005 10:19:33 AM

liltxsubby

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Surrounded by darkness
no light, only black
every other sense magnified
enhanced with the loss of one

Rope scratching soft skin
limbs immobilized
coarse rope, soft velvet
even more contrasting

Footsteps heard falling
unhurried in their approach
ears suddenly overwhelmed
each fall a sonic boom

Strong presence felt
omnipotent, no escape
enveloping, powerful
straining against bonds so tight

A whoosh of cold air
then a fiery sting
skin quickly showing a mark
branded with a handprint

Straining against ropes
awaiting the next, unbearable
relaxing her guard
at that moment another Smack

Whimpers and cries filling the room
handprints left on by one
skin now a mass
of burning red fire

Then unbearable cold
a shriek escapes
uncontrollable shivers
it's over.

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RE: Spanked senses - 1/9/2005 1:42:12 PM

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Great and Very descriptive thanks for sharing!

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RE: Spanked senses - 1/9/2005 10:32:01 PM

SirSTRYKER

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poetic motion in words. a most deliglhtful writing. thank you

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RE: Spanked senses - 1/10/2005 7:43:53 AM

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you are both most welcome. thank you for the positive replies. i had given up writing but may become addicted again :)

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RE: Spanked senses - 1/10/2005 1:18:46 PM

INSIDEYOURMIND

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Well done!

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RE: Spanked senses - 1/10/2005 7:29:54 PM

FangsNfeet

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very nice indeed. sounds like you had this done before, would really like to, or both. Keep up the good work and reminding us Doms how wonderful being tied up and spanked is.