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Lorelei115 -> RE: help with profile please! (9/20/2006 8:35:32 AM)
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I would A) change the colors, as everyone has already said *grin*
B) Less exclamation points. You are enthusiastic, which is great, but show that through your words rather than excess punctuation.
C) Put in what makes you unique and different from other slaves. Why do you feel you would make a good submissive to the Domina of your dreams? Any unique skills or talents? Even just being open minded and willing to explore (as you are) is a good start!
D) Instead of a generalized list of interests, pick a few specific things that mean a lot to you- ie: "My favorite way to spend weekends is watching black and white films, attending live concerts, playing baseball, and crawling on my hands and knees to serve my Goddess."
E)I would take out the word "true" from in front of submissive. That tends to scare people off. What would be good is to describe WHY you feel submissive. Is it something you've always felt, or did it start later in life? Did you have any early experiences that led you to believe you were submissive?
F) Finally, tell us what you are seeking from placing this ad. Make it about the person you are trying to attract. "I am seeking a long term relationship with a strict Domme who will spank me mercilessly for Her pleasure." or "I am looking for a part time play partner to humiliate and objectify me."
I know its hard to write about yourself, but really, think about it this way. By having a clear, concise, well written profile, you are making it easier for a Dominant to find you, if you are what she is looking for. And its all about making things easier for her, now isnt it? [:D]
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