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~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/19/2005 12:41:43 PM   
FireWalker


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Bless U/us Father

I knelt before him and softly whispered
Bless me Father for I have sinned...
it's been much too long since my last confession
and I don't know now, where to begin

I saw a boy,
I want him.
I want to touch him, father
I want to hear his screams.
I want to bind his hands
And make him blind.
I want to pull his hair and make him kneel
I want to hear his sins , and give him penance.

And when it is all said and done...
I want to taste his tears.
Bring them deep inside me...

To hold him and whisper him to that place where only I can take him.
To tell him all his sins are forgiven,
I love him for who he is.
For what he brings to me,
and how he lays it all out for me to touch.

To lift his chin and unblind his eyes
To look into his soul, and find he is holding mine.

Bless us father for we have sinned
but what we do... for us is blessed
It is you father who has truly sinned
you stand before us and judge what is to come.
You label and decree what must never be done.
And yet, when the doors are shut,
and the church is locked,
one still watches, one still knows...
and it is that one who says,
Your will be done...

And so I stand before this boy and I tell him...

Come to me and kneel,
tell me all your sins...
I will bless them each and every one,
and give you freedom .

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Bless me Mistress for i have sinned...


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RE: ~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/19/2005 1:41:42 PM   
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Status: offline 		Nice post. I myself have always wanted to question God after I die. What an interesting poem you have written. For these where my thoughts before my catacisim. At mass the water still burns but the blood of christ goes down smooth. Of all my discussions, priest have made the most for interesting conversation. God made the rules but does he follow them himself? Now that would be a fun debate to have.

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RE: ~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/19/2005 2:16:23 PM   
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Thank you for taking a moment to read My writing, and for expressing the thoughts it stirred in you. I wrote this poem after an annual event held near My home. I think many of U/us have at some time had issue with higher powers... for Me it is a love/hate kind of thing. Course I love to be the higher power and hate the other option... -=winks=-

For Me it is more about mortal man and his judgements on how others must live their lifes. I believe that there is one being who watches over so to speak... and in doing so does not judge what W/we do, but sees it for what it truely is. What works for some does not for others. What is important is to find what works for Y/you and to be true to that.

Once again thank you for replying.

Till soon,
Fire Walker

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RE: ~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/19/2005 7:14:42 PM   
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Hi and welcome to the forums at CM!

Yes very deep thought on what will become of us when it is our turn to stand before the one they say is out there.

personally i believe God must have a very good sense of humor and more patience than the most patient of Doms lol cause otherwise we are alllll in BIG trouble.

Thanks for sharing it with us!


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RE: ~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/19/2005 8:48:51 PM   
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It is very nice to be welcomed into this little corner of CM. I have spent a little time reading here and have found many interesting views. I have brought some of the questions and thoughts into My own community and enjoyed some great conversations.

One of the gifts of free will... to be able to speak ones mind... -=grins=- well at least until some find a gag in or over their mouth...lol

It was My pleasure to share with you. I will be posting again soon I am sure.

Till then enjoy this life... the next one will be quite different.

Fire Walker

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RE: ~Bless U/us Father~ (first post here) - 1/28/2005 4:09:20 PM   
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quote:

. God made the rules but does he follow them himself? Now that would be a fun debate to have.



-=grins=-

I will take that debate.... God apparently gave U/us the 10 commandments, but He also gave U/us free will.... how sadistic is that? lol

-=winks=- it is also nice to see another vampire in the mix....

Till soon

Fire Walker

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