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iwillserveu -> To Mistress Dread (4/24/2004 6:09:11 PM)
To Mistress Dread I am being punished by writing You free verse That i will try to not make suck absolutely M’Lady was merciful and did not make Me write you a Sonnet although i’d try Though i doubt that would be any good Because i do not feel for you as i do M’Lady ‘though i’d try And feel unbridled love or lust To prove to M’Lady that i am trying to gain her trust (Hey a poem that does not rhyme is like trying to play Tennis without a net.[:)]) Although i am not into poly families or third generation anything i pray you try to allow your supplicant dispatch His duties to his Mistress and take not Offense where he tries to give You none Lest he have to write a Sonnet for anyone else (or at least try) She deems worthwhile For Dread, in a different life maybe i’d love you, or at least try Because at core you are lovable Even if you try to hide that core in a bitchy exterior That is as cold as ice. i hope you let your supplicant try To melt that frigid, bitchy exterior And try to experience the fire that surely lurks within Your deepest being. Although i do not do free verse well i try To do more than write a run-on sentence Whose right hand margin tries to be jagged And full of meaning. Because, MistressDread, if i do not try To please You Then this one should learn not to use forbidden words like “try” When M’Lady is already slightly pissed Well, i try to give you the gist Mistress Dread If i do not elicit a try at pity from your clenched fist i will wish i was dead. So please try pity me Mistress Dread So i can write M’Lady a sonnet a’la Petrach Which though i tried free verse i’d long for the structure instead To keep me from going off on a lark. (Note: Mistress Dread, i was being punished by writing a 30 line free verse poem (minimum this is I think 35 {hey, i’m tired}) to you that used try in every other line and calling myself your supplicant. The idea that I need your mercy was my conceit. Ditto the random rhyming. Sorry it sucks. You’re a poet. Imagine those constraints and write one for me. I doubt you’d do better. {Though i admit you could not do worse.[:)]}) I forgot to make this purple. This one asks if this is purple.

MistressDREAD -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/24/2004 10:27:30 PM)
freeVerse is dedicated to free expression and creative thinking you are enslaved by your definitions hence you cannot free verse if you are not free. Id say this was a suplicantverse because that is how it reads i will serve u now serving Me no rythum no ryme to meter in the tyme i will he says, he wont She says.. unless.... free verse in the 30s no anon no prose, no haiku no limericks irregular Cadence the Dread is always read, Take it from the non conformist, serveu is serving Me instead. hmmm now what should I think what should I say, yes punished yes rubish to Lady lost lust Ill not I SAY he is sorry he said in poem in 30 its tru I read.. but..... iwillservu seems hollow here wallowing in the mallow being forcefed to heal down to Dread I happen to like ryme in My Free VERSE and time why would I desire release My Bitchy design My Flames fly high and burns deep inside which just goes to show your ASSumptions of Me in your head. I do not ask for love here nor would I even try the cold as ice you feel My dear is deep with in your inside I have no suplicants its slaves that serve ME, giving their ALL totally. have you done the same? I think not hence My word of suplicant, supply i cant instead of iwill run on sentances are fun for Me running you and All crazy attentivly most times My meanings lost when full of rum they are making all dizzy from near from far seems to be a smart Lady about n a supl i cant whom will without doubt win Her time and his hope a place in Her Heart by a so called flameless Tart, serveu wants pity from a clenched fist. hmm~ remember it was NOT Me whom punished u alltho I think u wished. MistressDREAD™®©reg4/2004 [image]local://upfiles/9526/0926EC4AB3934F95AA3CD5EBE7AD7551.gif[/image]

MistressDREAD -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/24/2004 10:38:52 PM)
chaos I like to draw bad verse I always follow Ill leave the good verses for you to now followwwww!!

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread - ou're right (another poem) (4/25/2004 2:10:41 AM)
Ok, You’re Right[:)] I thought about this last night. No matter your reply, You're right. If you are offended by lousy verse and tell me you have never read worse, You're right. If you laugh and say it was a good attempt Considering how the conditions went, You’re right. If you exclaimed your unbridled lust As in the poem I asked you because I must, You are right. (Side note: you’d also just be playing along. Everyone understands that.) If you told me your icy exterior Defended me from your icy interior, You’re right. If you claim M’Lady threw me out You’re wrong. This one is a little better. BTW, was that first one purple? Oh red = hot. I knew that icy exterior would be meltable.[:)] (See the emoticon, the “[:)]”? I’m joking.)

MistressDREAD -> RE: To Mistress Dread - ou're right (another poem) (4/25/2004 8:39:26 AM)
play is the way for the Sadist to be sane and run everyone else completly crazy instead the Bitch in Me will remain in Steed I have always stated I will Lead, onceinawhile follow good or bad verse My hearts not hollow the hues of color, I have never seen I take your word for it purple it is then on the screen. but I AM always Right, what you have seem to forgot is the suplicant, submissive, slaves ALWAYS has the last word Yes Mistress,Master or what not! (now you go back to your online cyberslaven 4 Lady and have fun, I enjoyed your scene time gave to ME here but, I have reallife slaves beside Me I prefer to give My quality time with as well. Simply say Yes Mistress, and be done.)

proudsub -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 8:55:08 AM)
quote: (Note: Mistress Dread, i was being punished by writing a 30 line free verse poem (minimum this is I think 35 {hey, i’m tired}) to you that used try in every other line and calling myself your supplicant. That was a very interesting punishment, loved it. BTW my Master is going to punish me for my grammar correction to MistressDread, just hope He doesn't pick up on rain's comment about deserving to drink urine [:'(]

ModeratorThree -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 9:06:39 AM)
quote: just hope He doesn't pick up on rain's comment about deserving to drink urine ewwww...... Better hope he does not find out what you did with his toothbrush.. LOL Just messin' with ya girl [;)] ModeratorThree

proudsub -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 9:22:43 AM)
quote: Better hope he does not find out what you did with his toothbrush.. LOL LMAO yeah me too!!!

LadyBeckett -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 12:02:34 PM)
Ha Ha Ha Ha I do declare, proudsub, you may have sealed your own fate, poor thing! I just want to know who is bringing the pop corn??? [;)]

LadyBeckett -> RE: To Mistress Dread - ou're right (another poem) (4/25/2004 12:10:23 PM)
Your gracious participation, Mistress Dread, and your sense of humor, is absolutely appreciated.

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 6:28:02 PM)
Proudsub, mention this and perhap he will make you write Dread a poem.

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread - ou're right (another poem) (4/25/2004 6:31:14 PM)
Yes Mistress (I feel I should apologize to M'Lady for calling her "Mistress" but i think she'll understand. {"Think", "Hope"; same thing[:)])

proudsub -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 7:40:17 PM)
quote: Proudsub, mention this and perhap he will make you write Dread a poem. SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!![>:]

MistressDREAD -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/25/2004 8:00:47 PM)
Anything to assist a Sista wit Her subject Lady Beckett to bad he never realized that My use of sum words were actually a compliment in My way but to each his own. he is a bighead but he is allright for a sub.

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/26/2004 2:14:21 AM)
I love you as a person too, Dread. I already said I'd help ytou fix a titre if you break don on the side of the road. Depeding on the situation I might even tell the chauffer to tap the starter with a wrench while turn over the engine. oh, thank you.[:)]

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/26/2004 3:58:37 PM)
Dread, I know this may sound stupid after you dismissed me, but thanks. You were a great sport.

MistressDREAD -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/28/2004 2:01:11 PM)
I donot concider any words stupid and you of all people should know that by now.[:o] ~smiles~ ( maybe this will get that reply "Yes Mistress" outta him Lady Beckett LOL )

iwillserveu -> RE: To Mistress Dread (4/28/2004 4:53:50 PM)
Yes, Mistress Dread.

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