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My written words... - 1/23/2005 7:38:31 AM

NsearchOFmydom

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I wrote this for a Dom that I met here,,,It was unappreciated. Any thoughts??

Could it be…
That I have found my first and my last?
The one who will challenge me,
The one whose tests I will pass.
Open I am to all that you desire,
So take me and mold me,
Into all that you require.
Willing to satisfy you,
With everything I do.
Please show me Master,
What truly pleases you.
For I belong to you now,
To do with as you will.
So have your way with me,
Until you have had your fill.

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RE: My written words... - 1/23/2005 8:44:32 AM

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If it was unappreciatied then i would say that he is not the one for you!

It is beautiful and expresses what a sub feels towards her master. Thanks for sharing it here.

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RE: My written words... - 1/23/2005 9:58:38 AM

NsearchOFmydom

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Thank you for your gratitude...
You are right he was not the dom for me...
Still seeking the one who will true to himself and to me.
Jeni

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RE: My written words... - 1/23/2005 10:39:03 AM

DameDarkness

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that poem was beautiful.......... any Dom who could not appreciate such beauty is completely blind.

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RE: My written words... - 1/23/2005 2:50:11 PM

FireWalker

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-=smiles and nods Her head softly=-

Well done litte girl, very nicely said. you will find your One and T/together you will see a wonderful world.

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RE: My written words... - 1/24/2005 1:22:46 PM

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I like it myself. Perhaps the dom you seek to please felt you're moving in to fast or just wants to make you work harder. Also, the dom may be trying to stay tuff and now show a soft side. Anyways, it's a great poem.

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RE: My written words... - 1/26/2005 7:36:35 PM

atHisfeet

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i might be speaking out of term here but you must first write to please your own soul. if you write it just to please another it is lost on them, dom or not. let the verbal foreplay please and tease yourself first. when the words seep into your mind and flow through your fingers they become extensions of who you are and what you feel. this being said there are many of us that write and intend to convey one emotion while others will interpret something completely different.

if he knew you well and trusted the feelings described in your poem they would have been special to him. he was not worthy of such a poem. his loss, someone else's gain....

oh and thanks for writing it;)

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