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ADORE - 1/24/2005 10:53:51 PM

subbella

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ADORE

He sits before me, as our eyes meet.
I kneel in submission at his feet.
As I lower my head and take my pose,
My lips soon devour his feet and toes.

I show how much I adore this Man,
I show my love as best I can.
The gift I give, which is sacred and sweet,
Begins each time I adore his feet.

Then I become the sacred whore
To the Master I so adore.
My will is his for the day or the hour,
So completes our Exchange of Power.

No other man has my permission,
To take my gift of sweet submission.
He is the one that holds the key,
To the very best, the heart of me.

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RE: ADORE - 1/25/2005 8:23:11 AM

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Thanks Bella very well put!

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RE: ADORE - 1/25/2005 7:09:56 PM

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The passion gives me chills...Nice poem.

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RE: ADORE - 1/25/2005 8:06:20 PM

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Thank you! I'm slowly going through my journal and posting my poetry on here. I have more erotic accounts of our sessions on another journal, and I plan on adding them as well. My Master is very supportive of my creative writing. I'd love to write a book someday!

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RE: ADORE - 2/1/2005 12:56:20 PM

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bella that beautiful...thanks for sharing!

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RE: ADORE - 2/2/2005 4:15:11 PM

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WOW! another nice poem written by you. I look forward to reading more.

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RE: ADORE - 2/4/2005 10:10:23 PM

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Excellent and will look forward to reading more of your thoughts

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RE: ADORE - 2/6/2005 10:28:54 PM

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Thank you to all who have responded to my poem! I love my Master very much, and He has read the poems and responses -- he is very pleased. I look forward to sharing more in the future!

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