Violate me

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atHisfeet -> Violate me (1/26/2005 7:16:08 PM)
My mind is a canvas that shows the purity and simplicity of my soul. Yet when I am near you I find myself covered by a naughty image. Slip under the cover and waken my flesh, release my soul. Devour my innocence and leave me craving more of you. Feed me only of yourself, let me drink you in thus becoming one with you. Violate my purity, take it, bend it ... I give myself to you Master.

theroebabe -> RE: Violate me (1/27/2005 5:38:39 AM)
That was beautiful thanks for sharing!

match2u -> RE: Violate me (1/27/2005 4:16:09 PM)
it does touch - thanks a lot hug and kiss petra (white snowflake in the ghetto)

atHisfeet -> for Him (2/1/2005 7:02:00 PM)
your lips are my music my flesh feels their tune my body moves in a trance the world is spinning you are taking control kiss me you're the one i've been searching for i have needed to lose myself for so long strong arms holding me in place like an infant in the womb you encase me the power is yours take me desire lust and raw emotion you'll not hurt me any more than i will hurt you satisfaction lies within the element of pain let your inner self go wild i trust you bind me your hands explore my body i close my eyes you watch me drink you in you feel my muscles contract as you fill me you could be my everything release me

theroebabe -> RE: for Him (2/2/2005 3:19:15 AM)
This poem says so much! it is wonderful thank you!

FangsNfeet -> RE: Violate me (2/2/2005 4:13:14 PM)
Yes yes, great indeed. It's great to be seeing a wonderful poetic writter on the boards.

atHisfeet -> RE: Violate me (2/6/2005 11:07:08 AM)
quote: ORIGINAL: FangsNfeet Yes yes, great indeed. It's great to be seeing a wonderful poetic writter on the boards. i blushed. thank you. i have a lot more and actually submit to another site but i figured since He comes here He may enjoy seeing it here as well. again i thank you for the compliments Hisgirl

SirSTRYKER -> RE: Violate me (2/28/2005 10:31:29 AM)
There is a vast difference between writing words and writing what O/one feels. I think I've just got a glimpse of how you feel about Him. Thanks for sharing the love.

atHisfeet -> RE: Violate me (3/1/2005 11:13:46 AM)
quote: ORIGINAL: SirSTRYKER There is a vast difference between writing words and writing what O/one feels. I think I've just got a glimpse of how you feel about Him. Thanks for sharing the love. quietly i say thank you, but love is something he and i try not to speak of. he means more to me than he should.

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