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~ I Am ~ - 1/26/2005 9:12:46 PM

FireWalker

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I Am

I am the shadow you thought you saw
The whisper you think you hear.
I am the breeze the cradles you
yet, I am your darkest fear.

You are what my body desires
Your thoughts, your dreams, your secret fires.
You arch to my whisper, and ache to my touch.
You want me to hold you, so much.

The night washes over you, like the waves of the sea.
With ease push it brings you closer to me.
Closer to my touch, closer to my scent,
Closer to that which the darkness brings.

Closer to the hunger within .

copyright 2002

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 2:32:53 AM

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that's not bad! That's not bad at all!! It makes a refreshing change from the usual plumpuller drivil. It'll never overtake Led Zeppelin, but it's a good start.

Can you sing?

The likely scenario is you don't remember anything that happened a week ago, but that's o.k. it's the times we're programmed to.
What inspired this dig was listening to Led Zep & wondering what else is going on out there.....

'When The Levee Breaks' was recorded at Headley Grange, Hampshire [England]
the sound of a 30" bass drum knocked my assets off.
At the time I was mixing a 'new' band
U.2
I tried explaining the 'drive from the back' idea
I even drew a flow-diagram
waste of time

only Larry Mullin understood what I was on about
& he had his head so far up his fundamental, that proved useless too.

Funny how ideas set off memouries.

Good writing though; learn to play the piano.

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 5:40:17 AM

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That was wonderful, thank you for sharing!

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 10:50:39 AM

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-=winks=-

yes of course I can sing...lol and there are even a few who will listen without being tied to a chair! I also took piano lessons as a child, Classical, can't play a thing now except chop sticks! mmmm

Thank you for taking the time to read, and to leave your thoughts. I always like feedback, nice to know what others think.

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 10:58:14 AM

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thank you Roe,

as I said it is so nice to get feedback, I wish more people would do this...

especially in this forum as it helps those who write to grow. For some it is a good way to build confidence and to keep writing.

So hats off to you for the things you do here!!

till soon

Fire Walker

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 12:39:38 PM

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very nice! i enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing....you captured a lot

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/27/2005 3:18:43 PM

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Hi Fire Walker I try and take the time to thank people who put themselves out here, it takes a lot of courage! So i want people who do it, to be appreciated. Also i like to read so its a pleasure for me but you are quite welcome, i do my best.

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/28/2005 10:17:45 AM

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-=smiles and winks=-

thank you ruffnecksbabygirl,

I am happy that My writing has given you enjoyment! That is a wonderful extra bonus for Me!

Encouragement is always a positive thing.

Till soon

Fire Walker

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/28/2005 1:50:08 PM

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Damn I'd like to use this poem for my profile. Good work indeed.

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RE: ~ I Am ~ - 1/28/2005 3:44:16 PM

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-=chuckles=-

Now that is quite the compliment!! I would be happy to assist you in writing one of your own, if you like? This one is very dear to My heart and I would not like to see it go to far from home. I am sure you can understand that.

Drop Me a note and We will see what can be done!!

Till soon, enjoy this life, the next will be quite different!

Fire Walker

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