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The execution of Daniel Smith - 1/29/2005 3:52:29 PM   
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Usual first person warning. I'm not a cop.

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I popped the tape into the VCR. I almost felt sorry for that scumbag. (I like that word “almost”.)

I saw Danny with his hands chained over his head and a ball gag in his mouth. His feet were in a spreader bar and on the ground. He looked frightened. He was stripped to his underwear. Nice touch, that. Naked might be fun for the pervert.

I remember the victims were hung out like that except they didn’t look frightened. They looked that unmistakable limpness that says they are past caring about anything.

No, perverts, I’m not talking about sub-space; I’m talking dead.

Then the camera moved to take in what could be seen of the location. It was big. Like an empty airplane hangar or something. No furniture. Nothing there but Danny the BDSM killer and two cages four rats.

Silly name. The press gave it to him before we caught him. I know some perverts and what he did is as much an anathema to them as it is to “vanillas”.

More so actually. You see he gave what they did a bad rep. Watch anything on TV that mentions BDSM and you’ll see that rep in action. It’s either played for comic relief or it is dark and sinister.

In my years as a cop I’ve never seen a fight at the BDSM night club. Not that they are perfect, but if your wearing ass less chaps going in jail cell might not be high on your list of things to do.

Then the camera swung around to show two people who stayed behind the camera. The woman was a knockout. She was wearing a red leather “domatrix” outfit. The man had a black leather strappy thing with, you guessed it, chaps.

Both wore what masks of Richard Nixon.

The voice of the man was that electronically disguised voice thing. We can get through that, but I digress.

He said, “Before you stands a convicted killer. Convicted by us. Unfortunately his case was thrown out on a technicality. We are for people knowing their rights, but c’mon, a trainee cop forgets so a serial killer walks?

“Unfortunately for him he was called the BDSM killer. I know he didn’t pick that moniker, but it kind of rankled some of us a bit. You see what he did was as akin to what we do as a bicycle is akin to a motorcycle. One thing he never got was consent.”

At this point he started making a fuss loudly going “mffh” and stuff. The woman whispered in the man’s ear.

He produce a key. They unlocked the gag.

“They consented!” yelled Danny. “They consented.”

The man looked hurt he was lied to. “All of them. Consented to be brutally murdered. Is that what you ask us to believe?”

“Yes,” said Danny as sweat trickled down his temple. “They all wanted to be killed they asked, even begged for me to kill them like that.”

The woman put the gag back in his mouth, locked it and took out what looked like a blood pressure cuff pump and attached it to the front of the gag and stsarted pumping away. Soon Danny’s cheeks puffed out imensly.

“You have the right to remain silent,” said the man.

The woman whispered in his ear again. And he smiled.

“That was unexpected. We’ve decide to let you speak in your own defense. That was it. If you have anything more to say, tell the devil or whatever religious bad guy you had.

He turned to the woman, “We can decide if we should edit that out later. I kind of liked it.”

“Back on script, Unfortunately for him we do not believe in that ‘cruel and unusual’ nicety. This tape is a ‘snuff’ film. He will die. Painfully. We will try to rescue him before he dies before doing something else. Eventually he won’t live. When and what he dies of, we don’t know.

“We are preserving this on film so we can send it to any families of the 18 women and one small boy we know he killed. We understand some might not want to see it, so we will send them a post card about this film. To get it mailed to them they only have to take out a personal ad with the right wording in an “alternative” newspaper.

“If seeing him painfully getting done to him some of what was done to a loved one brings any peace to the survivors, this tape is worth it.

I could think of several people in Law Enforcement who would enjoy this. I can also think of several who’d want to investigate it. The latter people will not be seeing my copy.

“We will edit it a bit. Some things will take hours. I don’t think anybody wants to watch rats cower for hours before they realize the have nothing to fear from him.

“Speaking of rats, you have no doubt noticed the cages. Rats generally are afraid of humans, unless driven by something very powerful. These rats have not been fed in two days and Mr. BDSM killer is the only source of food besides each other. They will quickly learn that though the other rats fight back, Danny ‘consents’ to being eaten by not fighting back.”

He turned to Danny, “This floor is a concrete slab and the walls are well,” looking at the camera, “something they can’t dig through. Raise your legs, but sooner or later they give way and come down. I hope you’re alive when we come back.” He slapped Danny in the face. “This is fun.”

The camera focused on Danny. The woman and he left after they opened the cage doors.

Danny raised his legs with a terrified look in his eyes.


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Anyone care to continue this?


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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 1/29/2005 5:12:13 PM   
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i, for one, would like more. This is a great start, imho.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 1/29/2005 6:00:00 PM   
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Are you asking for someone else to take up where you left off? That might be an interesting idea... And I happen to enjoy the darker writings...

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 1/29/2005 9:03:32 PM   
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I think you have a good start why dont you try to add a little more see where it takes you!



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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 1/31/2005 11:53:30 PM   
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If you can iwillservu - Id love to read the conclusion to that story ......

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/1/2005 11:28:13 AM   
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mmmm yes, I would also like to read more...
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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 1:24:10 PM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: MadameDahlia

Are you asking for someone else to take up where you left off? That might be an interesting idea... And I happen to enjoy the darker writings...



Yes, feel free, please. Saftey is not a concern.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 1:25:49 PM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: theroebabe


I think you have a good start why dont you try to add a little more see where it takes you!





Hey you changed your avatar. (probably changed it months ago and I'm just noticing.)

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 1:27:37 PM   
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quote:

Anyone care to continue this?


Please, I'd like to see what happens next too.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 7:29:36 PM   
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AS Danny raised his legs as high as he was able the camera catches the drops of urine as they fall from his thighs to the concrete slab beneath his now burning thighs. If you look hard enough you see tears and can faintly hear sobs come from this pathetic worms filled mouth. It was a bad choice the ball gag. I think the dick shaped one would have suited this lowlife much better but thats my personal opinion.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 8:07:00 PM   
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I switch it off for another one i had lol i only have 2 i like and i think someone mentioned the other one was not very subbie like lol.



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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith - 2/4/2005 10:07:16 PM   
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Do continue..........

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/6/2005 8:35:31 AM   
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Time lapsed. I saw the rats stop being afraid. I saw Danny get tired and lower his legs.. I saw them gnaw at his feet and him raise his legs and lower them again repeatedly. The Rats opened a vein and he passed out.

Then the scene changed. He was spread eagled on a rack. His feet were bandaged and he had an I.V.

The woman in the Nixon mask came on camera. She spoke through that voice changing thing. (We can get around that, if we try.)

“I’ll be alone for this. Men can be so squeamish about their balls. Oh if you have testicles you may want to fast forward by this. Fortunately the camera operator has no external internal organs.”

First though I want to show the gag.” The camera focused on the gag. “It is an ordinary egg. It is held in with but mascara gluing it to his lips. He can bite though it any time. If he does the yolk’s on him. Sorry, I could not resist the pun.”

I also want to show you, and him, this dandy.” She held up what looked like little vice. Then she held it in front of him.

She put her finger in the vice and slowly tightened it so that it stayed on her hand. “You put the ball in here and turn this little handle. Slowly it gets painful. I won’t go that far, but eventually it would really hurt my finger.”

She could see Danny’s fear. “Relax,” she said, “I’m only going to do this twice.”

She cut away the boxer shorts he was wearing to reveal his penis was encased in a little metal tube.

“I better explain that. In case he ever gets thinking naughty thoughts, that is too small for him to become erect. Added to that is a ring with sharp needles, if he starts to expand it hurts like the dickens. It is a stainless steel that will allow him to pee. We’ll let him keep it when we put him in a shallow grave.”

“It is attached to his balls. On effect of it is to push his ball forward. And also conveniently they won’t be able to crawl up into his body like in frigid water.”

She attached the vice thing and started to slowly crush his left nut. The egg didn’t last long.

Danny broke the egg. It dribbled down his face and he spit the bulk of it out and begged for mercy.

“Your victims begged for mercy, and you showed them none,” she said. “Why should I show you some?” As she asked she turned the vice tighter.

“Because you are better than me,” said Danny.

“True,” she said “But this is such fun,” as she tightened the vice a bit more.

“I’ll tell you were to find a victim the cops never found,” he said as sweat ran down his face.

She turned the vice handle another turn and over his screams she said, “I’m listening.”

“Off of highway 138 near the intersection of route 124. She was a hitchhiker,” said Danny.

I’d check this out. As another murder this gave us hope to arrest Danny again. Of course, his admission would be inadmissible, and he might be dead, but looking for the remains is not a waste of time.

“Now that I know that why don’t I proceed as planned,” she asked as she turned the handle again.

He screamed and then said, “there is another I have not told you of.”

She loosened the vice, but left it on. Then she took a gag shaped like a penis and put it in his mouth on top of the egg pieces still there.

After strapping it around his head she told him, “if your story checks out you may have saved your right nut. Now back to my fun with your left nut.” She then started tightening the vice again. As his gagged screams became the soundtrack.

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Anyone want to continue. Offer stands.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/6/2005 11:47:54 PM   
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She had wanted to pop them both open and watch as the life steadily ebbed from his genitals – how very fitting that he should give his own life through his genitalia. But she refrained. There was much in store for this degenerate – this foul blight upon the sensual world of whips and chains.

After she’d tortured him for a good long hour of teasing and pushing his limits well beyond what he had wished to ever tolerate she left him, drenched in the mess around his face, the vise still weighing down one of his testicles.

He lay panting there when another woman entered the room. The rats darted ever which way and scurried into the corners of the room. She’d left the door open so that they could escape the building and head toward the nearest field or sewer. She didn’t care where they went because She’d found the rat that held her interest.

Two lovely men whose faces were most unfortunately concealed behind leather masks entered the room after the petite woman. “Alright,” she murmured softly, “Get that vise off of him, pull the cock out of his mouth and then haul his worthless ass to his feet. Shackle the little toad up against that wall over there.” She left the room and retrieved a lengthy hose. After her boys had chained him up and stood back she pushed down on a trigger, letting loose a spray that doused the filthy rodent from head to toe.

He gasped and squirmed, the chilly spray shocking him back into a fully alert state. Sputtering around mouthfuls of water he tried to shy away from the forceful shower. “I bet this is more appealing than that golden shower you administered from above the corpses. You sick sonofa-,” she finished hosing him off and handed off the hose to one of her darlings. He departed, taking the hose with him.

She was quite the sadist and so very fond of bestowing others with pain. However she’d never truly unleashed the extent of her cruelties. She’d never wanted to make the news in an unfortunate way as this piece of filth had. But now it no longer mattered. She considered his lack of respect for human dignity and rights to be all the consent she needed. After all it seemed to have worked well enough for him.

She pulled him forward along the track he was dangling from. Bringing him out into the middle of the room she smiled slightly. “I should intricately bind your penis to a pole, give you a rusty knife and set this place on fire. But I’d hate to spoil the fun for everyone who is to come after me.”

His eyes widened at the threat and then widened more so upon hearing that others would come to torment him. “We’re a creative bunch – capable of conjuring painful – oh so very painful things to life. But we will make sure that they do not rob you of your essence just yet. No, not yet,” her threat lingered coldly in the room, made that much cooler by the chilled water evaporating from his skin.

Picking up a candle she lit the wick and then used his upper arm to put out the match. He yelped as the flame singed the hairs on his arm and left a small red welt. Dropping the match to the ground at his feet she waited for the candle to begin melting. “This has metallic additives which means it will burn hotter. We’ve spared you the puny paraffin and gone straight to extreme type of fun. But that seems to be your sort of kick now doesn’t it?”

He swallowed around a thickness that had been steadily growing in his throat. His face paled when she picked up a fair sized box of the type of candles she held in her hand. “Just imagine how much fun this will be to work our way through these delightful colors. And it isn’t as though I’m playing with anything that will make you bleed to death so I’m sure we can prolong our fun for ages and ages. Unless we forget to feed you and you waste away like that one girl they found in the cage in your garage. You remember her emaciated face, right? Sure you do.”

It was about this time in her tirade that she noticed a single bead of wax dripping from the top of the candle. He noticed it too. His lower lip began to tremble as his face twisted becoming a mask of fear and sorrow. Pain soon joined the mix as she splashed the first bit of wax over his chest.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/7/2005 3:39:13 AM   
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Oh thanks both of you for adding to it, it is wonderful more please!



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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/7/2005 6:32:06 AM   
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Heh... if no one picks it up I'll be happy to continue with Part 2.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/8/2005 3:57:20 PM   
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Run with it, MadameDahlia. I'm glad to be a reader not a writer.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/8/2005 10:12:49 PM   
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Alrighty then...

Part 2! Not for those with a weak stomach...

She enjoyed the begging. She enjoyed the screams. Surely she would have done well in the times of the Salem Witch Trials or in the times of The Inquisition. She would have been one of the most feared torturers alive. It was principle that kept her on the straight and narrow. It was principle that stayed her hand. But he lacked that. He lacked decency and kindness. He lacked honor and honesty. And for this he would be made to pay so very dearly.

His tortured cries formed as pockets of compacted air, rattling around in his tired lungs. They’d travel up through his throat and escape through his parched lips as shrieks, screams and gasped whimpers. She cackled, pleased to be the source of his suffering.

When he had been covered from head to toe in wax she delighted in peeling the cooling or hardened wax from his body to reveal bright pink flesh, burned in some places where the hottest of the wax had splattered across him.

As she peeled the wax from his shriveled manhood she watched in disgust as her touch caused him to stiffen, blood quickly rushing to flood the cells of his penis. Slapping it with an open hand, he felt a numbing spiral of pain shoot from his groin and up into his chest. Had he not been bound and hanging from the bar above his head he would have crumbled to the floor in a heap, curled protectively around his abused genitals.

“Your disgusting prick is of no concern to me. How dare you harden in my presence! How dare you think to salute me with such a vile show of your carnal interest. You will suffer all the more for this transgression!” she ground out between gritted teeth.

His body twisted and writhed in an effort to double over with the still resonating pain. She snapped on a glove and reached between his thighs. Curling her fingers around his genitals, she squeezed firmly. He yowled in agony.

“Beg for mercy. Beg me to continue throwing heated wax upon your blistered flesh. Or perhaps I’ll squeeze until they pop like grapes in my hand,” she uttered softly, her threat seeming to be so much louder than his panting.

“P – please, please continue to throw wax on me. Please don’t pop my balls,” he gasped, his breathing punctuated with gasps as she twisted his family jewels in her palm or applied more pressure.

Her smile grew gradually. He knew that meant more pain. “Please!!” he screamed, hoping to avoid having his intimate bits so cruelly mutilated.

She released him from her grasp and stripped off the glove. “Open your mouth you wretched lowlife.”

His lower jaw swiftly fell, sensing that she’d changed tactics. He’d comply with anything to get her to cease squeezing his balls.

She pushed the glove into his mouth and smiled. “Don’t swallow that. No one here cares enough to resuscitate you. Likewise, do not drop it. You cannot imagine what you shall experience if you do.”

A shudder slithered up his spine as he fought a new batch of tears. He’d cried so much, so long that his flesh was dry and the salty tears stung his face as they dripped over his cheeks and beaded at his chin.

As she lit another candle he watched one of her muscled young men enter the room with a small wooden crate. He shivered, contemplating what he might find within.

It was set upon a table near by and she smiled, no – that wasn’t quite right. She grinned. Very much like the Cheshire feline did.

She licked her lips in anticipation as the first few drops of wax splattered across his chest, causing him to flinch. The heat of the wax was irritating his already warmed flesh from the first waxing.

She nearly covered him in head to toe once more. She was kind enough to wait until he woke after having passed out sometime in the middle of the event. She chided him severely and continued on.

Eventually she stood back, viewing her work with appreciation. She invited everyone in to view it as well. They marveled over the colors, touching him – laughing and teasing. Despite the pain racing through his body he felt incredibly shamed, so much so that he nearly forgot about the pain.

That is to say until he felt a searing heat near his left shoulder. She was back – that Tiny Torturess. And rather than waxing him she was using the flame atop a new candle to gradually melt the wax away.

He jerked and screamed, crying out at the pain. But she carried on – intent on melting away as much of the wax as she could. When the candle died in her hands she’d melted over half the wax from his back, legs and arms. She’d avoided his genitals and behind – she had other ideas for them.

Stepping toward the crate, she flipped open the top and picked up a knife from within. He paled at the sight, his heart hammering away so hard in his chest he felt it might explode through his ribs. However confusion ebbed in, carrying away some of the fear as she produced a lemon from within the crate as well.

Placing it on the table she sliced into it and picked up half. Setting the knife aside, she moved toward him, smiling that oh so gleeful grin. He glanced toward the citrus in her hand, wondering why she’d be so pleased.

In a matter of moments he realized why. She squeezed it over his shoulder, letting the acidic fluid from within drip across his seared, cauterized flesh.

His lips fell open in a horrified expression as the stinging pain spread.

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part 2 - 2/9/2005 9:57:26 AM   
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Damn, you guys are good :)

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RE: The execution of Daniel Smith part something - 2/9/2005 1:22:38 PM   
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The scene changed again. This time the guy in the Nixon mask came in. He checked the IV, and the bandages.

“We’ve decided, Danny, that I’m good cop. I don’t have to tell you who bad cop is. I also won’t insult your intelligence by telling you I’m a moderating influence on her. Although in a sense I am one of the reasons she has not killed you. Yet.”

“I think knowledge can be worse than ignorance, so let me tell you of the IV. You are getting fed and hydration through the IV. You will get hungrier and thirstier, but no food or drink will come. Eventually you’d die, but we are keeping you alive. Just thought you should know.”

“Mistress who’s name I’m not stupid enough to use on tape – call her bad cop – took of your chastity thingy so she could have the pleasure of slapping your penis down. “

“Personally I like the teeth of Kali in there that stab you if you get thick. I like them so much I sharpened them for you.”

He then put it on the prone Danny. “It isn’t locked. I’m afraid Mistress bad cop can take it off and slap if your penis some more.”

“Oh, good news. The body you told us of checked out. Now onto the other bit of good news. If you beg to die I’ll pump the gag so much your cheeks bleed and then tie a tourniquet around your neck to stop the bleeding. Or something humerous. "

"After we check out the other remains you talked about, of course. If your lying, well, you’ll see more of Mistress bad cop than humble old good cop. Of course if you are gagged it may be difficult to beg,” as he said this he pumped the gag a bit more.

“Oh, still more good news, you get to keep the right nut!”

“I’ve got lots of good news, your burns are pretty much healed enough, but not too much to deaden the nerve endings. It was a close call. Mistress bad cop sometimes skirts close to the edge.”

“I can’t wait to share the news with Mistress bad cop!’ he said as he left.

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Sorry MadameDahlia, I (or i) just wanted to get back to that other body Danny claimed. Please continue.

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