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skip this, seriously move on, im not kidding - 1/30/2005 3:07:29 PM

BluesMate

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I dont think poetry is my strong suit
No,Rephase, I know poetry isnt my strong suit
As a matter of fact it was awful
So i in the act of kindness I have
removed my attempt at being poetic,

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RE: FEAR oh yea trouble me so..... - 1/30/2005 6:23:32 PM

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Take two sudafed tonight and have a hot cup of green tea in the morning.

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RE: FEAR oh yea trouble me so..... - 1/31/2005 3:24:45 AM

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Thanks for sharing this part of you.

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RE: skip this, seriously move on, im not kidding - 2/1/2005 6:22:46 PM

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I'm sorry I missed the original post. Please don't be fearful of posting your writings, this is not a place for critical comments, but a supportive place for sharing. I hope you feel free enough to share with us soon.

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RE: skip this, seriously move on, im not kidding - 2/2/2005 6:08:09 AM

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quote:

I'm sorry I missed the original post. Please don't be fearful of posting your writings, this is not a place for critical comments, but a supportive place for sharing. I hope you feel free enough to share with us soon.

I agree. Poetry, is about your thoughts. Reguardless, of how they come out. We'll always welcome anything you write.

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RE: skip this, seriously move on, im not kidding - 2/2/2005 9:31:06 AM

ruffnecksbabygir

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ah, come on...i'm sure most of us here are not "poets" or anything of the sort, there's no wrong or right way of writing what's in your heart....i've written a few myself, and they didn't even make sense probably to anyone else but me, but hey, that's the point, to express what's inside you and share with us that side that perhaps no one else sees....i'm sorry i missed the original post!

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RE: skip this, seriously move on, im not kidding - 2/6/2005 11:46:59 AM

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i would love to read the original post - you write for yourself first and foremost. if you read in and feel a warm sensation somewhere deep inside then it is beautiful. words cannot often express the emotion one feels.............i am sorry you felt you had to delete it.

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