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topcat -> RE: Greetings to A/All (11/11/2006 12:46:20 PM)
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M.Steven-
For starters, spellcheck.Then, unless you have been knighted by the crown, drop the sir.
As to the content, as you point out "theres not much to say about this master", so you might clip back the 17 paragraphs that basiclly repeat that you are a nice guy with a good sense of humor, close to your family, and looking to meet a 30- 40ish sub/slave female.
Add one paragraph about the things you enjoy in life, and one about the sort of things that attract you to a woman.
Take a good picture (see:http://www.collarchat.com/m_55684/mpage_1/key_pictures%252Cphotos/tm.htm#55684 ) and post it.
Then, Wait. you are not going to get much of a response in a day.
Good luck in the hunt
Stay warm,
Lawrence
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