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Leaving - 2/7/2005 9:03:07 AM   
DameDarkness


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I shall miss you my friend.
You that helped me.
Brought me back.
Lifted me away from something as death.
But just when i was seeing.
You are leaving me.
Away to the distant land.
A feeling of utopiatic mysery drowns me.
Unsure of what I should do.
Get you to stay?
Shed a tear?
Be happy?
Dive deep into that undying pit of loneliness?
A controlled fight of teeth and nails.
Faught like a bloody cat against the world.
Yet you won.
You delved into a heart long though deceased.
Now you leave.
I don't know what to do with how i feel now.
Do i hold them in the for front?
Do I throw them back into that sarrowing despare of yesterday?
Leaving......that is what they all do.
I never expected it from you.
Are you scared of what i have shown you?
Shown you that is deep inside this thought to be empty shell.
Misery is just a feeling,
but devastatingly sweet after what you have shown and woken inside me.

Dame Darkness

< Message edited by DameDarkness -- 2/10/2005 8:11:03 PM >


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RE: Leaving - 2/7/2005 5:46:29 PM   
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Thanks for sharing wonderful writing!




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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: Leaving - 2/28/2005 10:37:32 AM   
SirSTRYKER


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I subscribe to the thought that the only thing worse than never finding the O/one...is loosing T/them. Sadly, I share the sentiments of this piece of work but gladly you said that which I could not. My thanks!

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