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The Empty Road??? Part 3 - 2/13/2005 10:46:43 PM   
knees2you


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I awoke,
and was aware of my surroundings.
The past several days had all been a blur.
I was strapped down to a padded table,
I had electrodes attached to my skin.
Suddenly I felt the shock of volts surging thru my body!
My head twitching, it was the only part of my body that
was not tied down.
I screamed as the volts ripped thru my body!
I was powerless to do anything and I was at the mercy
of whoever had me here, and for whatever reason?

Suddenly the door flew opened!
In walked a Woman wearing a red leather suit.
I could see that Her fingers had what appeared
to be long needles attached to them? She wore a mask, and all I
could see was Her dark ruby eyes.
she proceeded towards me, slowly but precisely.
The insides of my body were shaking violently,
but my outsides where tight as a drum.

When She had reached my naked body,
She had undone my neck and shoulder strap.
Then She rose Her fingers and placed then all around
my neck. Squeezing Her fingers deep inside,
draining what appeared to be thick fluids.
I had tried to scream again, but the point
was mute. My throat was pulsating, my eyes flapping
like a Hummingbirds wings!

She jerks the needles out and slowly starts to talk.
“You had become one of them, you where once
a Vampitie, once a Creature of the night.
But now You belong to us!
The Woman that you tried to drink from,
has a very rare blood type 0B-.
She causes people like the ones you used to be,
to become like us.
But also She is a very rare individual. She and one other person
are the only people to share this blood type.
We have not found the second, and need that person to
complete the cycle.”

Slowly I try to speak.

"What cycle!" My voice getting better.

"How can anybody join and become one?"

"Never mind that." She says. "Just listen."

She then explains the story about how the Vampities got
Started.
“They are not entirely Vampires; they are a cross between Vampires and Cannibals.
They only live or strive to fill there bodies.
They have no blood of there own and have to drink
once a week. There spices as some might call,
have been around since the days man was able to record
time. They where Cannibals that had mated
with demons thus becoming the Vampities."

She then explains about the purpose of the 2 persons needed
for the completion of both becoming one.

"Once the 2 people are joined in unison, they will have powers
needed to destroy the Vampities.
We cannot allow these 2 very important people to fall into the wrong hands. If that was to happen, then the World people know now,
would no longer exist in the way they would be use to seeing it."

I slowly try to speak.

“What if you don’t find (coughing) this other person?
Then what?”

looking more intensely at my eyes, She says.

"Then the war will continue!"
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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 3 - 2/14/2005 3:31:13 AM   
theroebabe


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Very kewl! More please!!



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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 3 - 2/14/2005 5:02:41 AM   
velvetvixen


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quote:

The insides of my body were shaking violently,
but my outsides where tight as a drum.


I really liked this line.

Thanks anthony for the story.

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