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The Other Me - 2/16/2005 9:47:57 PM

abusiveownerstoy

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who is this i'm staring at
with tear filled eyes and quivering lips
i've never seen such longing
buried in such heavy eyes
but its the melancholy expression
that swallows me whole
such hatred for life
and contempt for fate
who, good lady are you?
i ask as if there was a doubt
a doubt to your identity such eyes could only come
from a glance of a mirror
such a heavy expression
only from the arches of my own face...

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Have you given in to your darkest desires? i am still waiting for the right One to lead me thru these portals.

i am not looking for romance or share time with the wife, i need discipline and order which only comes from consistency.

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RE: The Other Me - 2/17/2005 12:10:24 PM

theroebabe

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Wow lets hope we do not have to bear the anguish that you express so well. thank you for sharing it.

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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: The Other Me - 2/17/2005 3:35:06 PM

abusiveownerstoy

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thank you, i only write truth and experience, this could not come from one who hasnt been there. i live constantly on the dark side, havent met anyone who could change it . but i'm open...

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Have you given in to your darkest desires? i am still waiting for the right One to lead me thru these portals.

i am not looking for romance or share time with the wife, i need discipline and order which only comes from consistency.

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