pixelslave
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You just happened to catch me on-line as you posted. My apologies if what I have to say seems harsh, but I think your approach isn't going to be very well receieved at all. 
First, what you've had to say, is hard to read with alternating the color of text between red and yellow with every letter. Typographically, this a a big "no-no" as it's very hard on the eyes. The quotes you've added from others, really tell nothing about YOU, and in my opinion should be removed from the text of your profile. There are also some glaring spelling errors, particularly in the title line of your profile. Acceptance is spelled with an "a" (where bolded by me) not with an "e". That aside, I suspect the women here would prefer you get real, get off your knees, and tell something about yourself that will be meaningful to them and use an entirely different caption about yourself to get their attention. They'll have you on your knees whenever they're ready to put you there! 
As I said, I know this is probably sounding quite harsh, and my apologies as I know you are young and apparently just getting started. Its hard to distinguish which parts are on-line and which are real time. I'd suggest you entirely drop any specifics as to what you've done on-line as most women here do not consider that particularly "real". More importantly what they will want to know is what you have to offer as a man and a person. Your journal mentions certain limits that you might have, but you don't mention in your profile what they are. I think you need to spell them out and state them as they are. Tell the ladies who you are and generally what you are looking for. You say you're looking for an online romance, does this mean eventual marriage to you? 24/7 D/s, or what do you have in mind? Is there an age range you're looking for?
In summary, I'd suggest you add in your non-sexual interests to your profile (no need to state whether you're an expert, beginner, etc, just the level of interest) and add a line or two about those which are most important to you in your written summary. Tell something about your character and the character or nature of the WOMAN you are looking to meet along with what you think you have to offer her as a man in a romantic relationship and perhaps a service oriented one as well. The D/s portion will naturally follow if the 1st part catches a spark for her. But first you need to spark her interest as a woman if you ever want to get to that point. At the moment, your profile reads as though you're advertising for a something of a pro or another on-line domme. I strongly suggest you totally re-think your current approach and try to remove or at least restrain your testosterone from the equation and allowing it to control what you put in your profile.
I hope you find my comments helpful as I suspect they'll be echoed more than once. 
- pixel.
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Chivalry isn't dead! It's for those who have it in their hearts & are willing to be taught. It's a way of life, a code of honor; this one's armor still needs some polishing!
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Updated profile - would appreciate your views - 
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I've now changed it back as it originally was, but as a result of the simple text color change, its now pending review again. 
Needless to say, it's not something I feel a constant need to spend time reviewing these days and who knows how long it otherwise would have stayed that way! 
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