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a few... - 2/25/2005 6:13:28 AM   
sinnocentky


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it's a bubbling burn
when you have me wide open
a breath seazing yearn
when i dont feel you near

it's a toxic virus
creeping through my veins
a mind numbing drug
with you holding blame

it's an animalistic hunger
when i need you in me
a most primal need
feeding you, feeds me

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RE: a few... - 2/25/2005 6:13:54 AM   
sinnocentky


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i can dangle my legs
as i peer over your fingertips
knowing if i tumble
you will catch me

i can dance safely on your palm
as i smile with pleasure
knowing the light in your eyes
is just for me

i can crawl up on your shoulder
only to whisper in your ear
knowing those secret words
belong only to you

i can curl up in your palm
as your fingers curl to hold me
knowing that only you
have the power to crush me


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RE: a few... - 2/25/2005 6:14:24 AM   
sinnocentky


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the sound of your voice evokes immediate reaction in me
slick heat stirs from somewhere deep inside
seeping from my pores, my holes, my mind
i can close my eyes and hear you sometimes
feeling that reaction almost immediately
my breath catching... my guard slipping
feeling lucid, compliant, at peace
feeling so sweetly vulnerable, open to you
i like that feeling... i like that reaction

i cant recall a time that it has been so easy
you make me wonder what happened to me
my tough girl persona, my mile high walls
that person that hates to be vulnerable
the one that is jaded and spiteful and hard to get
the girl that believes nothing and doubts everything
who trusts no one at at all costs
im baffled as to how you do it so easily
yet im so glad that you can... that you do

above all it gives me faith again
that maybe im not beyond repair
that im not too far gone to come back
i can feel it... that belief in myself
i dont feel the need to challenge you
you dont give me the chance to even think that
rather than challenge you, i want to please you
i want you to see me at my best
i want you to see my potential...who i am

thank you for that.


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RE: a few... - 2/25/2005 6:52:18 AM   
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All are very beautiful, thank you for sharing them with us.



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RE: a few... - 2/26/2005 2:19:54 PM   
DRoseThorns


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different, Thank you for the read....

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