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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 5:29:27 PM   
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This totally screams "Tarantino."

Or M. Night Shyamalan, if this poster turns out to be one of the slaves, speaking to us from beyond the grave.

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 6:34:12 PM   
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Ok... ownership papers are valid in the USA?  People buying and selling in KY like so much left over produce?  And you don't want to call the local news stations in that count and make this a national news story!?  THINK of the bucks you could get from the Enquirer alone!
Or maybe World News is a better choice.
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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 7:31:49 PM   
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Hmmmm..I read it..then re-read it.  I am wayyyyyy too new here to make enemies...so...I will just keep my opinions on this one to myself...*sighs*

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 7:36:41 PM   
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LMAO! i have enjoyed this thread way too much! It would make an awesome book/movie!


Movie/book titles;

Manson goes Poly!
 
Lifestyles of the Drugged and Delirious Dom.
 
Don't Drink the Koolaid!
 


These are all hysterical! ROFLMAO !

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 8:21:21 PM   
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   Two of the four came back, I was mistaken it was the middle two that were blood sisters and took their papers and went back th their parents. The oldest and youngest came back from their parents to my slaves tonight as promised, the other two are supposed to be away another three days, but I am betting as they took their ownership papers and expressed toe want to be free woman they will not be back. They have my best wishes and I hope the Great Spirit looks over them.
  I have not had time to read all the replys but will and I thank all that have offered help and provided help as I needed it, things seem to be calm now.


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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/28/2007 11:33:32 PM   
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This whole thing very loosely reminds me of something I saw on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZXUHy8vrVY0

... the part that pertains to keeping your forum audience listening especially.

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 1:01:18 AM   
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like sand thru the hourglass... so are the days of our lives

ok... i am from kentucky.... and former law enforcement.... can we say this story set off more red lights than a hot chick in a porshe doin 120 eatin a donut? if the town is REALLY that small.... dont you think the whole town would know? and what are the chances that you just HAPPEN to live next door to another lifestyler much less a poly household... damn thats convenient... and if it is a major city... there would be battered womens shelters etc that could do more for those girls than you could... and if the town is so small... how'd he happen to find so many mutes? oh wait... or did he buy them like you did? oh wait... 2 of them were sisters.... dang what did they do for their parents to cut out their tongue and vocal cords... on BOTH sisters...but i digress

this is almost as entertaining as another profile/journal i read.

i wonder if the one that can speak is a "lil person" that says... the plane Boss... the plane

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 9:12:24 AM   
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LOL

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 9:17:53 AM   
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I can't believe this..NO MORE STORY? *CRY* I want more!!!!!!!
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I guess I gotta drink my morning coffee while reading Garfield again then

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 9:49:57 AM   
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I can't believe this..NO MORE STORY? *CRY* I want more!!!!!!!
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I guess I gotta drink my morning coffee while reading Garfield again then


Then the good woodsman Dom left a trail of bread crumbs through the forest so the mute and non mute subbies could find their way out of the woods.
 
Meantime the horrible Sheriff brother of the muderous Dom was making soup from the poor subbies cut out tongues.
 
Wait, it's a bird, it's a plane, it's Super Dom! He rounded up all the little lost subs and took them to the good Fairy who gave them magical cat tongues so they could talk. Which was wonderful except that all the subs who got cat tongues kept hacking up fur balls.
 
THE END.
 
Tune in next week for another episode of the Delirous Dom files. Mean tine don't forget DO NOT DRINK THE KOOLAID.........

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 11:25:36 AM   
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Reading this thread brings to mind those McDonnell’s commercials the ones with Magic Johnson and Larry Byrd…

“…off the lights, off the bleachers, around the poll, from behind, nothing but net!”

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 4:00:06 PM   
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  Two of the four came back, I was mistaken it was the middle two that were blood sisters and took their papers and went back th their parents. The oldest and youngest came back from their parents to my slaves tonight as promised, the other two are supposed to be away another three days, but I am betting as they took their ownership papers and expressed toe want to be free woman they will not be back. They have my best wishes and I hope the Great Spirit looks over them.
I have not had time to read all the replys but will and I thank all that have offered help and provided help as I needed it, things seem to be calm now.




Gotta love when the poly "dom" cant even keep straight which fake slave is which fake slave, and gets them all mixed up even in his own head!!!

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 4:18:22 PM   
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I think we should watch the e-book-files for this story in print. It's so convoluted he couldn't plot it for himself and had writer's block, so he's put it here for all of our thoughts to get ideas on what to happen next.  I wonder if everybody here will get credit on the "dedication" page for helping with the plot.

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 5:00:05 PM   
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The writing just sucks all around--plot, story, grammar, all horrendous.

Please don't attempt to find an agent or have this published.  You'll only embarrass yourself.


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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 5:24:30 PM   
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Wait till Aileen finds out he's in NJ.  She'll leave for good this time.

After reading all the threads, the fact that there are meds and a therapist involved speaks volumes for me.

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 6:21:42 PM   
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IT has to be true.  Wierd things like that happen in kentucky all the time. I know, I live here :)

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 8:03:01 PM   
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ok, let's figure this out.....if possible (start playing Dukes of Hazzard theme now)

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One of my slaves lives in KY lived next to, but didn't know it, a extremely cruel Master that now is possibly facing a murder charge or two.

ok a little confusing...although the O.P. lives in N.J. he somehow ownes a slave in KY.  Now this here slave has lived next to a poly house that contained a cruel master but didn't know it.  This guy as possibly killed at least two people.

Tonight one of his slaves got out and got to my slaves house, he came there beat my slave and grabbed his, my slave called the cops.

Now one of his slaves escaped, ran to his KY slaves house.  The evil master followed said slave.  When to KY slaves house and beat the KY slave, and grabbed his own slave.  I thinking, by reading the next paragraph, that the cruel master and his slave never left.  Some how the beaten KY slave called the cops.

Then my slave and the one that escaped went to the house to look for the others and couldn't find them. One of them they didn't find dug herself free and ran to my slaves house, the closest house with lights on, found my slave and her sister slave and lead them to where the other's were bound and hidden.

ok so I'm guessing the cops came, took him away.  Which left KY slave and newly escaped slave to be the "Hardy Boys" and go into that house of horrors to find the other slaves.  Now why didn't escaped slave know where they were in the house, and why didn't they tell the police so that they could go and be the one to look, I mean what if one of the slaves chewed themselves free and was lying in wait for the crule master to hit him in the head when he returned?...anywhooooo....
 
Then one of the slaves that they couldn't find in the apparently "gigantic" house, got free (just wasn't the master's night was it)...and went to KY slave's house, found KY slave and escaped slave, which just happens to be her sister. (which I'm wondering in that sense why she wouldn't have the police tearing the place apart looking for her, or at the very least, she goes herself, gives a quick look, the goes, "oh what the hell" and goes back to KY's house for tea and crumpets)....anywhooo....finds KY and her sister there and leads them to the promise land...or in this case the missing slaves.

The cops say he will never be free again seems he missed a lot of court dates and had a lot of warrants.

Never mind the pesky fact that he just beat the crap out of two people and have a houseful of slaves....again...anywhooo....

He had four slaves now with my slave in her house.
ok, now we have KY slave, and four abused slaves, two of which are sisters

He had a big house that gives them all nightmares that is empty and in one of the slaves names free and clear. I guess we will rent it.
ok now we f**k the drama of the story and go strangly into real estate.  So we are not swooping on this house of horrors and deciding how to cash in.
3 of the 4 are mutes! He liked that, they could not call for help and had no internet access.
1 he got pregnant he beat until she miscarried, 1 murder charge, seems he was wanted for another murder plus other charges.
Now we are back to a bit more of the trama drama...which is just written so  poorly I'm not even going to comment on this one

I seem to have my poly family bigger and  and faster than I was ready.  I believe I can handle the size of the family if I was there, but long distance? I was and am very good business manager and I am starting a company. I have my customer support staff now it seems.
ok, so now you claim to adopt this family, sight unseen...and on that note, have you ever seen KY slave? or is she some net thing?...anywhooo... you say you are just starting a business...so...when were you planning to move to KY?  And how generous, you are already putting your slaves to good use....they are not support staff for your new company

I am stuck in NJ caring for my mother whom is almost 84 and fell before Christmas and broke her pelvis. I have another slave in GA that was headed for KY to wait for me to be able to let my mother alone.
ok, gotta break this paragraph, if you can call it that up...or we'll just keep getting lost...now we have 4 abused slaves, one KY slave, and not one GA slave....woof
Now I have 6 but it is stranger (I couldn't make this up if I tried!) , the one in KY has two daughters in TX right now both call me Master, 1;18, 1; 20. I have spoke to her daughters, I had thought the three and the one in GA might complete my family or be close to completing it, the other 4 came as a surprise. I am talking to others as well, I may have to back away from now.
ok, back to the score card...now KY has two daughters, and they are yours too....now we have 8.  and you say that you MAY have to back out of others that you are talking to?  You have 8 slaves, to my knowledge you've never laid eyes on....or at least you haven't laid eyes on 6 of them...not sure if KY and GA are net things or  not.....yeah yeah yeah...anywhooo.....
The 4 are 18, 20, 22 and 28 I think, and the mother of the two in TX is 36 , the one in GA is 46 I think. My head is spinning.
  The mother and daughters get along well and they have communicated and got along with the one in GA well long distance so I thought they would do well under the same roof.
The 4 got along well under the same roof, the 4 get along with my slave well, she is acting as Alpha now.
ok so GA, KY and her kids have only spoken on phone I'm assuming, but everything is hunky dory with them, and the 4 abused slaves...well they got along great as well....although they never spoke a word to each other, and from your earlier writings didn't where the others were located within the house

I have spoken to the 4 online now and by phone, they signal by tapping the phone mic 1 for no and 3 for yes, all they can do one talks a little but is scared too as he beat her if she did. She, with a lot of coaxing, told me all he did. He was not a Master he was an abuser of woman.
ok, so now we are tapping and having a good ole time on the phone and internet...which these women miracoulsy learned how to use.  Now one is so tramatized that she could be "coaxed" to talk to a complete stranger over the phone, whom she never laid eyes one, and not only find her voice but spill her guts.....hmmmm

They do say cheaper by the dozen, but this is mind boggling. This is true, not a joke, though I did add that bit of humor, right now I do not know whether to laugh or cry.
I will offer each the right to freedom if they want and help them be free or to find another Master or Mistress if they do not want me. If they all stay I am not sure I am looking for any more! Maybe a Mistress to help me run the family?
Any  advice on how to handle long distance abused slaves? Heck any advice on handling 8 even?
Now you want to add even more confusion to the mix by bringing in yet another stranger...a co Master or Mistress.....dude...this so needs work.
you need a "thought flow"  you run back and forth in the story to cover things that you didn't think of earlier....


ok people...how did I do?   is this how everyone else understood it? 

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 9:20:11 PM   
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ok people...how did I do?   is this how everyone else understood it? 


Oh Great Goddess!  You made me read it again! And I forgot my boots! You cuties in the hot tub move over please?

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 9:51:54 PM   
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ok people...how did I do?   is this how everyone else understood it? 


Oh Great Goddess!  You made me read it again! And I forgot my boots! You cuties in the hot tub move over please?


oh crap!...with adding the music and everything I forgot to put in the boot warning....my bad......LOL

(might need some room in that tub myself)

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RE: HELP! (not made up!) - 1/29/2007 10:04:57 PM   
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We live in a very small rural area and when I go to town for feed or mail or whatever, everyone knows everything that has gone on, is going on, is planned for miles and miles around.  They feel free to give people mail that is not thoers based on the fac that someone lives on the same road, everyone leave their keys in their trucks and if you see goats loose on the road you know where to put 'em back.  Law enforcement might keep it out of the papers for a while but everyone for miles around would know about it.

But it facsinating to come back and see today's web-isode!


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