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Trust - 3/10/2005 7:16:41 AM   
twistednpierced


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Have you ever seen your heart?
Had somone rip it out and crush it as they toss it
aside?
I gave mine to him
He who proved that my hearts every beat was a
priviledge in my exhistance
To give completely, To sacrifice all that I stand for
Hes gental squeezes circulate the blood though my
veins
At any moment he could stop..... leaving you
lifeless.....but you trust.....

To have trust.... real trust.....
To know that every lick from the whip can take you
further into space
That one slip of the blade... cut too deep.... can end
it all

You say you trust.......But do you?
Then why do you struggle when puts his hands around
your neck?
When he cuts off your air and you start to spin
What if this is the one time he holds on just a second
too long....
Doesnt give you taht quenching gasp to forfill the
agony thats built inside.....
You squirm, fight against him, so he knows you need to
breath? Like he forgot?
Instead he holds just a bit longer....everything gets
fuzzy and starts to grow dark

You hear the crack, and feel teh whip slice through
your skin.
You realize its you holding your breath..... that gasp
of air.... in anticipation for the next crack
It hits... you realize that the struggle wasnt with
him
It was to avoid the licks that the tail leaves welting
on your skin

Breathing you realize breathing is also a privledge
You dont stuggle from his grasp...you two have grown
on honor and trust
Each waking day you chose to give your heart....as
gental and fragle as it may be....
To another to control the waking of your life.[/center][/font]
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RE: Trust - 3/10/2005 1:09:50 PM   
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Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing, it is so true.



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RE: Trust - 3/11/2005 2:48:22 PM   
twistednpierced


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Im glad you liked it thank you for the comment :)

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RE: Trust - 3/12/2005 2:08:18 AM   
murdoch


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Just amazing. I only wish I could trust someone like that.
I'm sure luck has nothing to do with your partner, you too must be amazing.
I hope you write more.

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RE: Trust - 3/12/2005 6:55:09 AM   
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That was beautiful..no one could say it better

be well

tamtam

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RE: Trust - 3/25/2005 3:18:33 AM   
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Well Done! Well Said! Well Written! That's trust in a nutshell - thank you!

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