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what next - 3/11/2005 1:50:52 PM

lilgirl73

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what will tomorrow bring
more murders,more births,more wars
life is hard working and being honest
life seems easier breaking the law

murder,robbery and stealing cars
then of course we have the wars
people dying in the third world
mostly because bombs are hurled

around the world,all goes on
swindlers are about,ready to con
men are fighting,faces are gashed
cars are stolen,joyriden then smashed

pensioners are mugged and knocked to the ground
where they lie frightened until they are found
police are called,but nothing is done
the attacker is now out having fun

a child is abused and taken away
taken away without a say
the abuser is arrested and taken to jail
where hell stay or will the courts fail

punched and kicked and hit on the head
several weeks in a hospital bed
leg in a plaster,and arm in a sling
what else will this bullying bring

screams are heard in the dead of night
a woman fighting with all her might
the man thinks rape is the best fun of all
but soon at his home the police will call

a body of a child is found nearby
the community shocked and they all cry
a child age 3 with no enemies around
we all pray his murderer is found

all nasty things are still going on
from the rich and famous to the beggar mans son
for these crimes to stop we must pull together
or they will go on from now until forever

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RE: what next - 3/11/2005 2:03:32 PM

BigBadWolf

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Sighs....My 15 Year Old son was murdered Dec.22 2003.
Shotguned to his belly in his bed room while wearing his nighty.
Died in my arms a full hour latter.....

The man who did it wrangled a Plea deal for giving up his drug dealer buddies...so was only sent to a mental hospital....

I carry a side arm now. to protect my daughter. The world is a much meaner place than it once was...than when I was a child.

I'm now a board member of Parents of murdered children...
the problem is people who do this dont fear the Law to many loop holes.
since my sons death I've seen 7 murders walk for any number of reasons.
I aggree with you....but dont see it happening any time soon

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RE: what next - 3/12/2005 7:40:48 AM

theroebabe

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Its sad but true all that you have said, we have ti try and make it better as best we can.

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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: what next - 3/20/2005 12:15:07 PM

lilgirl73

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i am so sorry to hear about your son
i hope what i posted didnt offend you or anything....i wasnt meant to
{sighing}
once again.....im sorry
hopefully one day your sons murderer will get what he deserves

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RE: what next - 3/24/2005 8:04:03 AM

SirSTRYKER

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the poem hits it's mark, hopefully the violence will stop. And to you BigBadWolf, though I haven't lost a child, or grandchild yet, I offer My prayers to You Friend. God Bless!

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RE: what next - 3/27/2005 5:40:31 PM

lilgirl73

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anything you do or already doing can only help stop whats happening in this world
and i truly hope it helps you too

hugs and prayers

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RE: what next - 4/1/2005 9:38:41 AM

baphomeh

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these thoughts i have had running within my head from a young age.. what can be done indeed?
all those who protest must disband restist fight sperate congregate and recreate.

create a new world within this one where these things do not exist.
create a place for us to go where these horrors will not be missed.

create an engine of wealth itself to fuel our break from their bonds.
a home of warmth and seperate space far from prying eyes.

that has just been my own thought and deed. four years ago i left my old world behind..
the small section of this world that i was a master within.
free to make a lot of money and watch the world around me prey upon itself.

if we all stood together and decided that instead of hoping and wishing, THIS
generation the wheel could/would stop at least somewhere in the world.

i have heard of communes here and there where freedom is semi assured.
but that is not enough. i only have heard of them. i do not know of them or
how to find them excepot through friends of friends.

i dont know what the next step would be to somehow make a change but i know
the first step would be to make a place like that a haven sanctuary for
the ones who will stand and fight this time with more than hope

maybe i will have more to say on this later.. but my life is dedicated to
the things said in this post and nothing else since 2000 so know that this
soldier stands fighting bleeding to see the end of it..

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