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Saying Goodbye - 3/12/2005 5:57:41 PM

snmsub

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I looked out the window today and saw the grey dull sky
it reminded me of my life.... grey, cold and empty
I see no colors, no children playing..
I wonder why I was put here, what my purpose is
and I cannot answer my own question.
No master to guide me, no mentor to teach me.
No purpose
No love

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RE: Saying Goodbye - 3/12/2005 10:26:49 PM

murdoch

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I love your writing, I hope you write more

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RE: Saying Goodbye - 3/13/2005 6:29:59 AM

theroebabe

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Thank you for sharing.

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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: Saying Goodbye - 3/25/2005 3:13:14 AM

SirSTRYKER

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Great writing. The first line made Me wonder if you also live in Pittsburgh...grey skys all the damn time here.

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