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Valley of Despair - 5/16/2004 1:19:00 PM

chainedpoet

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When in the Valley of Despair I do roam
I ask the Mistress,"Please take me home"
Show me the happiness that only you can give
Mistress,My Mistress teach me to live.
Poetic surrender is all that you ask
Be honest with me,don't wear a mask.
By your side is found warmth,
at your feet is found strength.
To be with you,
I need to walk the Worlds length.
Your Smile is Heaven,
Your Scowl can be strong.
In your actions and voice,
is found a beautiful song.
So when in the Valley of Despair I do roam,
Mistress,My Mistress please take me home.

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RE: Valley of Despair - 5/16/2004 9:08:14 PM

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Just want to say i've enjoyed your poems chainedpoet.

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RE: Valley of Despair - 5/17/2004 5:44:33 AM

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Thank you,I write for the enjoyment of it and for hopefully for the enjoyment of others.

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