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sweetobsession -> Pain (5/16/2004 9:48:33 PM)
it's been a long time since i havent written any poems but i came across this board and figured it wouldnt hurt me none so here it goes Pain Pain is when you love someone when they dont love you Pain is looking into someone's eyes or sensing their feelings and seeing them surrounded by darkness with you not being able to pick them back up Pain is watching someone who you fell in love with turn into a completely different person right before your eyes Pain is when you talk to a person and they are cold towards you when you did nothing wrong Pain is something that will make you stoop down to so low of a level that you arent sure how to rise above it Pain is watching the one you love love someone else and act like they care about you when they are just trying to be polite to you Pain is watching your child having to go through surgery and be in pain themselves and knowing that there is no way you can stop it Pain is something you feel when you believe to have found your soulmate only to find out that he or she is meant for another Pain is watching yourself slowly seep into darkness and not being able to fight the pain in order to stop it Pain is where you watch someone go from being your Master or Mistress to being completely vanilla and killing of their dominant sides right before your eyes Pain is something that a slave goes through when he or she submits to someone only to have them to turn them down like their submission was nothing to them Pain is something that you cant control and that could bring you to your knees time and time again Pain is my life and will be conquered when the time is right but until then it is jjust pain and I facing each other and one day there will be no pain and that will be from the peace of moving on

Thanatosian -> RE: Pain (5/17/2004 6:32:01 AM)
wow - deep, powerful, and moving thank you for sharing your pain with us

sweetobsession -> RE: Pain (5/17/2004 7:10:48 AM)
and thank you for taking the time to read this Sir :)

chainedpoet -> RE: Pain (5/17/2004 7:34:33 AM)
thank you for sharing your heart.Some day the Pain will diminish

sweetobsession -> RE: Pain (5/17/2004 8:17:11 AM)
thank you hun quote: ORIGINAL: chainedpoet thank you for sharing your heart.Some day the Pain will diminish

MistressDREAD -> RE: Pain (5/18/2004 9:55:34 AM)
Reading the words posted Im curious sweetobsession are you writing from self experiance or is your poetry simply the visions that come to you? Sum times when sumthing hits home to others so deaply the reader forgets that sum times the writer puts to paper thoughts and not experiances so I am currious being a writer My self if your writing is experiance prevoking or thought prevoking. BTW it is very VERY good and you should write daily regardless of where it came from. ~smiles~ [image]local://upfiles/9526/48D3FEB4D3DD4284932A8DD6D38D1A90.gif[/image]

sweetobsession -> RE: Pain (5/19/2004 5:51:27 PM)
thank you Ma`am and actually this is from all my experiences some of which i am still going through..i used to write everyday but then i started having writer's block and quit writing poems and stories until now, and thank you for taking time out to read it Ma`am it means alot to me quote: ORIGINAL: MistressDREAD Reading the words posted Im curious sweetobsession are you writing from self experiance or is your poetry simply the visions that come to you? Sum times when sumthing hits home to others so deaply the reader forgets that sum times the writer puts to paper thoughts and not experiances so I am currious being a writer My self if your writing is experiance prevoking or thought prevoking. BTW it is very VERY good and you should write daily regardless of where it came from. ~smiles~ [image]local://upfiles/9526/48D3FEB4D3DD4284932A8DD6D38D1A90.gif[/image]

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