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First Taste of the Knife - 3/15/2005 3:02:17 PM

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mmmmmmm -=she purrs softly as the knife trails over your naked flesh. you are told to keep perfectly still, you feel it catch as She pulls it up from your hip, across your belly and slowly to your nipple. Her voice purrs into your ear.........=-

"it would be so easy to let this knife have what it desires...to watch your tiny little nipple fall in slow motion to the floor... to watch as a little puddle of blood forms into a stream that flows lazily down you ending in a splash against the cold tile of the floor."

-= She smiles again and watches while you try to breathe, She can smell your fear, She can taste it too and it is sweet. you swallow what seems to be a very big lump in your throat... the edge of the knife teases your nipple and then flicks past it and moves slowly up your chest... to your collar bone... Her voice tells you to breathe Her into you, and be careful not to move to quickly, this edge is like a razor...=-

-=you pull in that breath and it fills your nose and floods your mind with Her scent.... you feel your knees weaken but she stands behind you and somehow holds you up... all the while that blade slips lightly over your burning flesh... you can hear your heart beating like it is going to explode from its cage.... you smell Her and know that She won't let you go... Her voice wraps round your mind and you hear Her words...=-

"you belong to Me... at this moment I am all that keeps you from falling, and if you were to fall this blade would take your life as quickly as a new born baby falls into slumber on its Mothers breast."

RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/15/2005 4:33:54 PM

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it is a good start to a story. Please continue I would love to read more.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/15/2005 4:55:39 PM

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This is a good one. Thanks.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/15/2005 11:21:54 PM

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Knife play... how very sexy. Thank you for sharing.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/16/2005 6:10:56 AM

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More please! thanks for sharing.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/16/2005 10:52:23 AM

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mmmm ask you ye shall receive.... or so they say... a little more knife play -=winks=-

-= Warning change in writing style=-

he whimpered as he tried desperately to remain perfectly still. he could feel a chill run rampant through his body as his mind painted a picture of what was happening to him. he remembered the knife lying on the red velvet pillow. How the weight of it made a soft indentation. It looked majestic lying there, like royalty.

He had often admired it with his eyes, never dared to actually touch it. Now it was pressed against his collar bone. his mind raced from one scenario to another. his body fought against his mind. It wanted to run while his mind screamed at him to stay still! he could feel his bare feet sliding slightly on the tile, wet with sweat trigger by fear, fear of the knife that She slow danced over his body. he was afraid to breathe Her in too deeply, what if he did and the blade cut him? What if he slipped and she couldn't hold his weight. he was much bigger than She was. How could She keep him from falling? his eyes stung, he squeezed them tightly together and although he did not feel them, tears slipped free and lazily rolled down his face.

She told him to breathe Her in again slowly... deeply... and to turn his face to her voice. he did as he was told and felt a shiver of cold as Her breath washed over his tears. It was then that he realized he was crying. She knew it the moment she felt him tense as his feet slid. She smiled as She tasted the tear on the tip of Her tongue then pressed it flat to his cheek and licked the salty wet from him.

"thank you, My pet" She purred into his cheek "I was thirsty and you fed Me...I do love the taste of fear mingled with tears" Her voice was smooth and calming, and he relaxed a little into Her.

The blade moved and he caught his breath again... a voice he did not know filled his ears..."ppplease Ma'am, ohhh, please...I need to"

you need to what, My pet? She whispered into his ear.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife - 3/17/2005 12:58:46 PM

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Ya know i am a mashochist but come on dont leave it like that!!!!!! sheesh RED RED RED

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 3 - 3/17/2005 4:03:13 PM

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"Tell Me what you need..."

his voice cracked under the intensity of the moments, he wasn't sure what he needed at that particular one... he was feeling so many things all at the same time. So turned on by Her, he could feel the cock he once owned twitch as it filled with excitement. his body ached with the intensity of what She was doing to him. Her words sent him racing in four directions at the same time pleasure...fear...panic and the increasing urgency to empty his bladder. he knew now why She had told him to never wait too long. "To pee Ma'am.... please??" The words tumbled out of his mouth, he held his breath after.

"hmmmm that sounds like a personal problem to Me... and you know I do not do personal problems don't you My pet?" she licked his ear lobe as the last word slipped from Her lips it seemed to sear his flesh. He knew this was not going to be easy...

She glanced over his shoulder, down his smooth flat belly... a smile radiated from Her face as She saw his cock. There it was standing very straight and swollen. mmmm now this was going to be fun She thought. "I see you have another little personal issue, My petttt." She held the last word a little longer than normal... amused by the shudder his body responded with. "It seems to Me you should have gone and relieved yourself before coming in to see Me, My pet...and now because you neglected to do this I am to suffer for your thoughtlessness... tsk tsk... I don't think that is very nice." While she was talking to him... her voice calm and even She had begun to move the blade back down his body...

he prayed she was going to let him go and pee... his lips trembled and his throat was dry. he croaked "Ma'am, pleaseee please forgive me... please Ma'am"

She loved to hear him beg. he did it so well. "would you like Me to help you My pet? Help you get relief?" She asked him in a caring concerned voice.

The blade dipped into his navel and then slipped back out again. She stepped to his right side and dragged the point of the blade down farther as She looked up at him without lifting Her face. Her eyes holding him as the blade pressed against the cock She owned. he swallowed hard and shivered as he looked at the only Woman who had ever been able to take him to the places She did. his eyes pleaded for Her help.

"mmmmmmm" She purred as the blade traveled down the now rock hard cock.... “I will help you baby....?"

he nodded slowly, "please Ma'am, please help me." he could not believe what he was saying... he didn't know what She was going to do with that motherfucking knife, his mind was electric with the thought that she might cut him... he tried to swallow but couldn't as he finish the thought with the word, 'anywhere', he thought cut me anywhere but not the cock, oh god please...

Her eyes slipped over his body , she could smell the sweat and the excitement that he was giving off, it made Her feel that exquisite ache deep inside Her stomach. She watched the knife as She turned it so the side of the blade was flat against the top of the cock, She pressed down so that the cock was pointed at the floor. She moaned Her own sweet seductive kind of moan and rubbed the flat of the blade in a slow intoxicating massage... She waited for a few more seconds, letting the sensations sink into his mind, then arched Her body into him ..." piss, if you must My pet, but make sure you send it far because My sweet... if I get wet, even as much as one drop, you aren't going to pee standing up again..."

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 3 - 3/19/2005 7:29:46 AM

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WHOO HOO! ok lets see if he can pee now lol!

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 4 - 3/19/2005 12:57:29 PM

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She smiled that smile as She held the flat of the blade to the cock he no longer owned and whispered so close to his ear that he could feel the moist warmth of Her breath on it. "Now ...." She commanded and smiled more as She watched Her cock spasm with excitement ....

When nothing happened She asked him " having trouble My pet... can't get things started?” Her voice was calm and very relaxed. "Need a little more encouragement? How about if I put the tip of this knife just inside your pisshole and tease the piss out of you? Would that help, hmmmmm?" She giggled musically and slid the blade a little farther down the stiff twitching cock, stopping at the rim of the gland. She looked up at him and winked slowly before She licked a lazy line from his chin to his earlobe again. his mind misfired, his body was becoming ridged, quietly She coaxed him "relax baby, let it go..."

he melted to the sound of Her voice, and came back into focus. his face, now damp with sweat, and the wet of Her seductive licks.

"MMMa"aaam," he breathed out finally "i, i don't think i can, Ma'am."
A small bead of sweat trickled down from the outside edge of his eyebrow; She caught it with Her tongue.

"mmmm... salty, baby." She paused for a moment that to him hung on for a very long time. "I think you can do it My pet, in fact I know you can. Come on... show Me how badly you have to pee."

he tried to focus, he knew what he had to do, he knew what muscles he had to use and how to use them. he had pissed everyday of his life... but he had never been made to piss quite like this. What if he did the unthinkable??? Hell! he was thinking it so it wasn't even completely unthinkable! What if he got His Mistress wet? his heart sank... "oh godsss" he thought, "I can't do this. But I have to do this, She wants Me to pee, and I don't want the tip of that fucking knife inside one of the best friends I ever had!" he tried again. he closed his eyes and bore down.

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 4 - 3/20/2005 7:41:57 AM

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OHhh i hope he doesnt touch her! what trouble he will have then!

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 4 - 3/20/2005 9:39:45 AM

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-=winks at Roe=- Me thinks I smell a sadist... oh look!! one approaches! -=laughs =- Roe,you are too much fun!! more to come soon. I am kind of enjoying this... mauahahahaha

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 4 - 3/20/2005 11:51:57 AM

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Wow what a Story!

Different then my Empty Road stories?
This one hits the Bdsm button on the button~

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 4 - 3/21/2005 2:14:57 AM

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wow what a great story, how long do we wait for the next chapter lol i was really getting into that and bang ended lol what a tease...will be waiting lol

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RE: First Taste of the Knife Part 5 - 3/21/2005 12:36:15 PM

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She watched him as a look of intense concentration took over his face. It reminded Her of a little child during potty training. Trying so hard to please the Mommy. She smiled at this thought and added to it, while She kept the pressure on the knife even and just enough to keep the cock from pointing up too high. "Yes, that's right little boy, pee for your Mommy." She new exactly what She was doing to this poor boy.

he moaned as he kept trying. "She knows all the right buttons." he thought. Calling him “little boy" made him melt. She had broken his concentration, once again. Throwing him off balance. he never knew what this Goddess was going to do next. Just when he thought he had it figured out he didn't. "Just piss as hard as you can and it will be ok." he had thought only a moment ago and then as if She had pulled out a violet wand and touched him with it...Zap! She turned the scene. If he thought he could scream he would but he knew that was useless. his throat was just not capable of that right now, and the feel of that blade against him reminded him of just how easily this could really hurt. So he opened his eyes and without turning his head he looked at her. Her face seemed to glow, She was radiant. he knew She was very pleased with what She was doing to him.

"Still having troubles concentrating...hmmm” the blade flicked over the ridge at the head as She looked into his eyes quickly and then back down at the cock. "Alright, baby I will help you. Are you able to stand still for a moment if I let you go?"

he nodded and croaked " yes, Ma'am, I can Ma'am." he tried to collect enough spit in his mouth to swallow. That was pretty much a failure. he watched Her as he felt Her hand slide down his back and lift away. She stepped back and smiled as she pulled the flat of the blade towards Her own body. The cock sprung up at the first sign of freedom. She laughed and whispered at him..."you are such a slut..." turning to a small table that he had somehow not noticed before. There, sitting elegantly on a piece of brilliant white lace, a crystal goblet and pitcher of water.

She winked as She put the knife into Her left hand and picked up the pitcher of water. She held it high above the goblet and slowly tipped it just enough to allow the water to trickle. He felt that ache that comes with having to piss so badly and hearing running water. Oh God... She was a Demoness... a Demon sent to drive him into some kind of incredible insanity, he thought as his eyes watched Her every move.

The sunlight reflected from the trickling water, it seemed to cast shards of light into his view of the room. She filled the goblet and started to set the pitcher down, She looked back at him and smiled again as She placed the blade of the knife into the pitcher. Setting it down and picking up the goblet.

"mmmm I do love the look of fine crystal... especially filled with water, it is so ... clean... so pure." She purred as She raised the goblet to the light, then back down to Her Red Lips. She tipped it and took a little sip, and then as She lowered the crystal, She licked the rim while walking back to his side.

his eyes stung with the need to blink, but he fought to not miss a thing She did. Somehow he had a feeling the best was yet to come...

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RE: First Taste of the Knife Part 5 - 3/21/2005 2:44:46 PM

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WHOO HOOO but i am sure she isnt nice enough to dribble on the tip of his penis is she? or ice on his balls? hmmm ice in the crack of his butt? oh i need some play good thing Master will be here soon whoo hoo!

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RE: First Taste of the Knife Part 5 - 3/21/2005 11:12:44 PM

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-=chuckles and then smiles at Roe=- now now now... you will just have to wait to see what I am going to do next. I must admit though that I have done the ice cube between the ass cheeks, one day I will have to share that story, it was a very interesting evening and a lot of fun! Well... I mean I had fun... -=winks=- Glad to hear your Master will be with you soon Roe!

Also thank you to those who are following this story, it is so nice to know that people are as twisted as I can be, or at least enjoy reading about it. There are so many good writers here, so much good stuff to read!

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RE: First Taste of the Knife Part 5 - 3/22/2005 5:53:59 AM

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there is nothing like someone who puts the "S" in BDSM into action---I love it!

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 6 - 3/23/2005 2:20:26 PM

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"Are you thirsty, My pet?" She asked him as She moved to look him square in the eyes.

he nodded and didn't dare to blink.

"Excuse Me?" She said as She dragged Her nails higher. " I didn't hear you."

he desperately tried to stay still and to breathe in the sensations he was feeling so that he could answer Her. his carefully planned "yes Ma'am, i am thirsty, please may i have a drink." came out in a different language it sounded something like air being sucked off of flesh, a kind of reversed hiss if you know what I mean. Mixed with words like " ahhhh ohhh..." and "mmmm sssyesss Ma'aaaam ahhhhh iii am" backed up with the opposite of the sound as he breathed out again slowly and much more composed " I am thirsty, Ma'am please" he paused and focused again "please Ma'am, may i have a little water?"

"Of course you can. It is so important not to become dehydrated..." She was impressed at how well he handled that little detour. She raised the glass to his lips and just as he positioned himself to take a swallow She pulled the glass away.

" ah ah ahhh... I think I have another idea." She pointed to the floor with Her index and middle finger slightly parted, he knew that hand sign well, he was to kneel with his knees apart and he did so.

She smiled down over him. “Much better... now open your mouth."

he opened his mouth as if he was about to receive communion. She brought the goblet not to his lips but to Her own again, taking a nice long drink, he watched swallow after swallow until the goblet was almost empty. With Her mouth full of water She leaned just close enough and while he looked into Her dark brown eyes, eyes that had held him hypnotized so many times, she became the fountain of life and shot a stream of water directly into his waiting mouth.

Water is a remarkable thing but one thing it is not is reliable as Her mouth emptied his filled and overflowed. Trickling down his chin in little rivulets, when she stopped he swallowed as best he could and felt his chin and chest wet. his mind swam as he prayed She was not wet.

he didn't want to look. he closed his eyes and swallowed one more time.

“Sweet, isn’t it little boy? How something so simple can be so good.” She looked at him as he remained still and nodded his head.

“Yes Ma’am, thank you Ma’am.” he answered. he started to open his eyes... then he felt it. his bladder could not hold on much longer. All this water was driving him past the edge. he had to pee.

She stepped back and motioned him to stand up. he looked so cute there on his knees, a little frantic, and the cock, well amazingly enough it was still engorged… She thought as She went back to the table to set the goblet back down. She pulled the knife from the pitcher of water. She looked back at him and in a voice that was not really asking but telling, “Ready to piss for Me now…”

Droplets of water dripped from the tip of the blade, splashing silently on the tile floor, while She stood there watching his agony in delight. To him they splashed with a sound like an entire pail of water being dumped on the floor. Straightening up as he stood just about finished him. he bit into his lip hard before answering. his voice was again one he really didn't recognize.

" yes... "

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RE: First Taste of the Knife...part 6 - 3/25/2005 5:03:09 AM

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OOh very nice!

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