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Dom/Sub poem - 3/20/2005 7:25:25 PM

BabyCashew

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Dom/Sub…..

The desire to be touched,
But much deeper than your skin
The need to be totally set free,
But to find that freedom from within
The want to be totally controlled,
But not in a menacing way
The passion to be appreciated,
Not shrugged off or left let go astray
The feeling of being wanted and needed, Knowing you are constantly on some ones mind
The craving inside that takes you over
Which only the other can satisfy you find
The empty aching feeling inside
When the other is not around
The dreaming even when you are awake
Hearing their voice, where there isn’t a sound
The absolute completeness, the feeling of one
Which you only feel when the other one is near
The love the caring the absolution
Because with them there is no cause for fear
You My Dominant/Master
And me your Submissive/Slave
You that has shown me what real love is
And that love I shall take to my grave.

I love you My Lord and Master
With all that I am
Yours In body and Soul
Your Submissive/Baby Cashew

dragons_swan_spirit.
Saturday, March 19, 2005

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/20/2005 10:44:01 PM

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-=smiles and nods =-

Very nice poem!

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/21/2005 1:57:16 AM

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Thank you very much I am glad you appreciated it, I have written many and all are from the heart or personal experience.
--------------To My Master------------

You have shared with me the good times
You have weathered with me the bad
We have cried tears of joy and happy times
And you have comforted me through the sad
You know when to use your words of wisdom
You know when to just sit and listen to me
You truly take on board my pain and anguish
And have the desire, from pain for me to be free
You can rage with the roughest of oceans
But you can be as calm as the tranquil sea
Ensuring that I am happy and content
Is more than anyone else has ever done for me
The tenderness I can see in your face
The total love I can see in your eyes
The warmth and passion that flows from within
All the emotions you just can’t disguise
You found me wandering aimlessly
With no place in particular to go
You reached out your hand and in it took mine
And in an instant I felt myself begin to glow
I love you My Master so completely so deeply
Emotionally, physically, spiritually and more
And I give of myself freely all that you desire
And together to new heights we shall soar.
Dragons_swan_spirit aka babycashew
Monday, March 21, 2005
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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/21/2005 2:41:04 PM

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Thank you for sharing them with us they are lovely.

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/22/2005 5:57:53 AM

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I think your Master has selected as well as you have written littleone. Well Done to Y/you B/both!

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/26/2005 10:03:20 PM

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another for you to all enjoy and thankyou for previous kind comments
love and light to all
babycashew

How Easily..

How easily I can close my eyes
and be right there by your side
to hold you and kiss you , love you and cherish you
openly without any reason for us to hide.
How easily in my mind I can drift away
and be exactly where I desire to be
knelt at your feet, or beside you in bed
just loving you, and having you loving me.
How easily I can pretend it is just you and I
and lock the rest of the world away
leaving us alone just to love and be happy
to fulfil all our needs and our desires to play.
How easily I get lost, when I look into your eyes
or see your smile and the love in your face
never wanting to be found, let me stay lost like this forever
for where it takes me is such a wonderful place.
How easily you won me without even competing
you just showed me what if feels like when someone really does care
you don't play with my feelings, you don't toy with my emotions
and if ever I need comforting, you are always right there.
How easily I could disappear into your world, away from mine
and release the aching submissive who needs to be free
forgetting my troubles, giving you total control
as you inspire me to be the woman I have always wanted to be!
I Love You Sir
Your adoring Pet, Your babycashew
Thursday, 27 January 2005

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/27/2005 10:07:54 AM

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I understand these words so well, as they are how i feel too! I am so happy my Master is back in my life! thanks for saying it so well.

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RE: Dom/Sub poem - 3/28/2005 7:12:40 PM

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Another grand piece of work. well done again!

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