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His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/27/2005 4:54:35 PM

Clynn911

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He spoke to me but not with words
A hand entwined into my hair

He sang to me but not with voice
A bite that special lovers share

He reached for me but not with flesh
A look upon my soul

He gives to me all these things
and more to make me whole

Oh how I wish he'd take it all
but he says it comes with time

He'll take it as he pleases
all that's his of mine

I spoke to him but not with words
kneeling on the floor

I sang to him but not with voice
my body begging more

I reached for him but not with flesh
giving him my soul

I give to him all these things
and more to make him whole

Oh how I wish I could give it all
but he takes it on his time

I hand it over willingly
all that's his of mine.

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RE: His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/28/2005 5:55:13 AM

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how lovely these words are, thanks for sharing them with us!

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RE: His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/28/2005 10:49:44 AM

Clynn911

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thank you very much...:)

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RE: His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/28/2005 6:19:59 PM

subbella

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cherry -- just beautiful -- absolutely beautiful! Welcome to the creative writing boards! I'm so happy to see you here. I hope you will read my entries as well!

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RE: His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/28/2005 7:06:03 PM

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Excellant way of expression thank you

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RE: His Time ~an impromptu poem - 3/30/2005 1:43:31 PM

Clynn911

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thank you to E/everyone... you make this slave happy with A/all your comments...:)

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