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Just thought I would bring this up. I am a switch, and I seem to have found some witing ability. Judge for yourself whether it is talent or not. If you like to read (umm this is a discussion forum) a switch might like this little work.
It is a bit longer than most BDSM stories around, but that is necessary to make the story work. If you read it you will see why. So if there is any interest I will provide links to the story, which is in my FTP as well as published on altairboy's site.
Future Shock The appliance
is a story of a guy who is a kinky switch, on an extended vacation exploring some caves. He and his friends stumble across these chambers somehow etched out of a mountainside. He foolhardedly lays down in an open one and it closes, and puts him in suspended animatiaton for about 400 years.
Now when I said this guy is kinky, I meant it. He goes back to school and is an engineer and inventor, and many inventions are BDSM related. People come with odd requests, and he fullfils them.
The guy gets rich and powerful, and does a few bold things, like illegal time travel and a few other tricks. He is not malicious or greedy but bends the law once in a while.
He winds up marrying two Women, which is legal in that time, and they have two kids each. One of the four kids becomes a kinkster, and not by anything they did, they kept that part of their lives completely seperate from the kids. When the oldest is 18 he has a GF who likes to play that way too. That is when Dad shows the kid the family business.
A couple of years later Dad offers the kid the driver's seat of the business, but the kid turns it down.
In one amusing incident, the kid, now 20, and his GF want CBs. Well Dad made them, no problem.
After the CBs were fitted to both of them, he hands the key to the kid, "This is the key to her CB". The kid wants to know where his key is, "What key ?". "Dad, that's illegal !", Dad just grinned.
First of all after the kid broke the security on Dad's computer, it was found out why, and corrected. The next day Dad took the kid to the President of the united states and had him upgrade the Pres's computer so that even the kid couldn't get in. Dad was pretty much untouchable.
The funny part is that the CBs were keyed alike. It took the kids about two weeks to figure out that fact. Maybe sooner, it's just that's when the kid stopped bugging him for the key.
This spans many years of a life in short order. Fast moving in some places. There is alot of set and setting in the beginning, but don't skip it. The author paints a picture of a near utopian society in which individual rights are of prime importance. Kinksters are respected, as is anyone who is different. The whole population of the US is about 12 million, the educational system is phenomenal, the currency is stable and the people are happy and well adjusted. There is almost no crime.
While kink is the centerpoint of this story, there is alot of life woven around it. It includes many forms of kink, MANY. While this is important to the story, if you read it and pay attention, you'll find yourself in a different world. A world in which people care about each other. People are different, and that overshadows any legal system, governmental, or any other environmental changes. The People themselves are different.
This is something that you love or hate. All opinions are welcome.
The first part is at :
http://members.aol.com/zzyzzwicky2/eg01.doc
Parts 2-5 have been made available on the net, if anyone asks.
Whatchall think ?
T
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