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YOU - 5/7/2005 3:50:28 AM

subbella

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You

Listened to me
and calmed my
fears.

You

Let me know
everything I said
was okay.

You

Shared your time
with me and
showed such
generosity.

You

Overwelmed me
with your
kindness.

You

Made me feel
special and
cared for.

I

Hope that is
how I
made you
feel.

Today.

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RE: YOU - 5/9/2005 5:40:15 AM

theroebabe

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One day i am going to be able to write my own poetry! thansk for sharing it is wonderful!

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Roe

People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: YOU - 5/9/2005 5:54:16 PM

subbella

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Miss Roe -- I think your addition to my poem shows that you have an incredible way with words yourself. Sometimes my poems just fly out of me, and sometimes I struggle through them. I've found the best way to write poetry is just to WRITE! At the time the words come to you. I hate it when a beautiful poem comes to me when I'm driving, or at work. It comes out perfect, then when I get home to write it down, I lose half of it! LOL Practice, Practice, Practice! I don't use one very often, but a thesaurus is a great tool, especially if you're trying to find a word that rhymes with . . . purple??? LOL

bella

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RE: YOU - 5/11/2005 6:28:04 PM

SirSTRYKER

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subbella, you have such a wonderful way with poetry. I understand the writers block thing and the flowing of the creation tho littleone. But to actually write poetry and to have it come out as yours does shows not only your love and devotion to your Master, but that you are indeed an artist with words. Thank you.

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B.O.H.I.C.A. (bend over here it comes again.)

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RE: YOU - 5/11/2005 10:13:56 PM

subbella

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Sir Stryker - the poetry just flows these days. Though the last few days I've been quite uninspired. I think it's work related! LOL If you like my poetry, you should see what I can do with paint and canvas! Perhaps I can share some of my artwork on the new art/photography board. Most of the digital images I have are not kink related however, though some are incredibly "sexy" and would probably be appreciated by the collarme crowd. I have started to do some more "erotica" artwork, and even did one self portrait for the upcoming "Sex is Art" show. There may be another self portrait, and if I can get a larger print out of my very favorite photo of Master and me, I may do something with that. My very first poem was written because I was so inspired by that photo. The poem and photo are called "Master's Kiss". If coaxed, I may give in and post that one on the boards. That is the poem that started it all!

That's the one Master says is a "classic".

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