Music with Pain

Join Our Community

Collarchat.com

Home Login Search

Music with Pain

View related threads: (in this forum | in all forums)

Logged in as: Guest

All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Creative Writings >> Music with Pain

Page: [1]

Message

<< Older Topic Newer Topic >>

Music with Pain - 7/4/2004 3:35:51 PM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

A kane
strong and steady
a single-tail
snap and sting
a flogger
kissing like an angel
yet making Siren's sing
the kane
starts the rhythm
steady hard and true
the single tail
sets nerves alight
in every color n hue
then the flogger
picks up the music
though heard by just a few
the moans
are beginning
the song must be sung
the cries
become verses
made as pure as the Sun
the tremors
are the finale
for the Siren is Done

hope you enjoy
- Slave Dee

Profile

Post #: 1

RE: Music with Pain - 7/4/2004 8:52:02 PM

MistressDREAD

Posts: 2943
Joined: 1/1/2004
Status: offline

nice

(in reply to Ladybug19)

Profile

Post #: 2

RE: Music with Pain - 7/4/2004 9:10:30 PM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

thank you Mistress Dread
yaaahhhh someone liked it hehehehe
Slave Dee

(in reply to MistressDREAD)

Profile

Post #: 3

RE: Music with Pain - 7/4/2004 10:47:58 PM

proudsub

Posts: 6142
Joined: 1/31/2004
From: Washington
Status: offline

quote:

yaaahhhh someone liked it hehehehe
Slave Dee

I liked it too. I've liked all of yours Dee.

_____________________________

proudsub

"Without goals you become what you were. With goals you become what you wish." .

"You are entitled to your own opinions but not your own facts"--Alan Greenspan

(in reply to Ladybug19)

Profile

Post #: 4

RE: Music with Pain - 7/5/2004 3:50:25 AM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

*feels special* thank you proud sub you guys are so good to me
Slave Dee

(in reply to proudsub)

Profile

Post #: 5

RE: Music with Pain - 7/7/2004 5:36:13 PM

dearydear

Posts: 9
Joined: 7/7/2004
Status: offline

well done dear yet you really are not that good yet

< Message edited by dearydear -- 7/7/2004 5:41:30 PM >

(in reply to Ladybug19)

Profile

Post #: 6

RE: Music with Pain - 7/11/2004 12:01:42 PM

SirDaniel

Posts: 93
Joined: 1/1/2004
From: Las Vegas
Status: offline

Very nice pet.

Attachment (1)

_____________________________

Sir Daniel
Las Vegas (Sin City), NV

http://members.cox.net/sirdaniel

quote:

Be true, honest, caring and loving,
and you will be found.
It is true, be you Master or slave.

(in reply to dearydear)

Profile

Post #: 7

RE: Music with Pain - 7/11/2004 1:44:57 PM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

Thank you Sir
Dee

_____________________________

Only when the body is bound, can the soul truly be free to soar.

(in reply to SirDaniel)

Profile

Post #: 8

RE: Music with Pain - 7/14/2004 8:42:14 AM

lookingwithin04

Posts: 48
Joined: 7/8/2004
Status: offline

very nice lady bug i really liked this one

(in reply to Ladybug19)

Profile

Post #: 9

RE: Music with Pain - 7/16/2004 8:42:05 AM

boiphil

Posts: 11
Joined: 7/3/2004
Status: offline

very nicely written.. :) what a talent you have, hun.

_____________________________

boi phil
__________
boi-poet-lesbian
http://www.geocities.com/subnaj/

(in reply to MistressDREAD)

Profile

Post #: 10

RE: Music with Pain - 7/16/2004 10:22:17 AM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

oh thank you boiphil and lookingwithin you guys are great))
Slave Dee

_____________________________

Only when the body is bound, can the soul truly be free to soar.

(in reply to boiphil)

Profile

Post #: 11

RE: Music with Pain - 7/18/2004 12:29:15 PM

BitchTrainer

Posts: 2
Joined: 1/1/2004
Status: offline

that was really good.

swish, crack, pain.

a gain, and ah a gain.

(in reply to MistressDREAD)

Profile

Post #: 12

RE: Music with Pain - 7/19/2004 8:53:22 AM

Ladybug19

Posts: 97
Joined: 6/21/2004
Status: offline

*blush* thank you Bitchtrainer))
glad so many liked it
Slave Dee

_____________________________

Only when the body is bound, can the soul truly be free to soar.

(in reply to BitchTrainer)

Profile

Post #: 13