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A Collar Of Kisses - 7/10/2004 6:26:17 PM

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A Collar Of Kisses

~unedited version~

Its about loving

without conditions

without force or

manipulation

but giving

because I can

not because I have to

you called me arrogant

said I felt I was better than the rest

maybe you think I feel I am

higher... or more valuable...but

my heart

my body

my mind

my soul

are mine to give

To submit is to yield and surrender

I yielded to your touch

I surrendered to your manipulations of me

not because I had to

not because I lost control of power to you

because I wanted to

not because I need to

because you needed me to

you need me

and I gave

as I superbly know how

exactly as you wanted me to

freely without condition

a sweet Selket offering

and you dont know...but somehow

it feels you twisted it

and made the gift less

and that hurts me

I am

not a slave as slaves you have known

there is a difference in me

you said it yourself

you submit to me in intimate moments and then regain control

and that what made us different is

I need your protection

but thats not exactly right

I want your protection... as I want your love

but I have before and can again

pick up my sword and put on the armor

champion my self

and I would champion you as well.

I am not truly free until I give all of me?

This is true.

But my freedom

my submission is mine to give...

You can not take what is given as a gift.

It is not about self collaring

it is about unconditional love.

I want you to kneel to me in love

and I will slowly sink to mine for you

I want you to stand beside me

walk with me

next to me

not behind me or in front of me

I want to give all of me in humble acquiescence

on balanced ground

it has never been about

tipping the scales of power one way or the other with me

it has always been about

and even exchange of energy

between two equals

I am not less than you because I am a woman

I dont know what else I can say to help you to see me

all of me

for who and what this gift of me is.

I have and can again

live without a mans arms

kisses

love and embrace...protection

I am strong...I can live without you

but I dont want to.

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/10/2004 6:38:37 PM

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Midear Flame-

Lovely poem- oh and nice leatherwork<g>.

I love the title- I can say I sent her back to SF with a collar of kisses, instead of a mass of hickeies now<g>.

And yanno, I alwayslike my girl to walk infront of me- both can watch out for her (which is my job) and so can I watch her walk (which is my pleasure<g>).

Stay warm,
Lawrence

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/10/2004 7:04:00 PM

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Thank you Sir

After ...savoring

your profile I believe I would prefer walking behind you

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/10/2004 7:35:48 PM

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hey flamey sis...as always my sis from another mom...i love your poems and stories

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/11/2004 12:47:48 AM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: topcat
I love the title- I can say I sent her back to SF with a collar of kisses, instead of a mass of hickeies now<g>.

Call it what you like, just know I enjoyed recieving the bites, the kisses, and a bit of your soul.

--bailey

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/11/2004 1:01:31 AM

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Sweet. just too sweet....

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/11/2004 12:55:28 PM

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mmmmm flamey hun would have to agree with you, walking behind him would be an uumm interesting pleasure

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/14/2004 8:50:06 AM

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my God all of the words that i have been searching for, are right there in your post, i love him, i cherrish him, need him, want him, care about him. But it's almost as if He doesn't feel the same, he walks ahead of me in a huge unfamiliar city, late at night, not realizing that i've never been in a situation before where there's homeless people and drug addicts begging for money, that night i became so frightened felt so unprotected, i tried to catch up but couldn't and all of a sudden i wondered if He could truely protect me if i was unsafe.

He tells me that i too am not His equal but does that equate feeling like a door matt to do everything He says, being able to take all He gives, sometimes it's just impossible. Sometimes, it just hurts to much and He doesn't seem to understand, i am new, i am scared, i want and need to feel as though i'm loved and cared for, protected and respected. I know i am but somehow there are always doubts, my emotions get the best of me and i begin questioning all of me and more.

Your post was beautiful thank you for saying the words that i myself can never find

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RE: A Collar Of Kisses - 7/14/2004 1:36:50 PM

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I've never posted anything on the boards, but I had to write. I loved this poem, the way it was written. It's how I believe submission should be-a gift given, not taken or used. You know that you're strong and you could easily take care of yourself, but you willingly give that gift to another. Very powerful message. And it shows you truely care about yourself and aren't going to let someone take advantage of you. Excellent!

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