sarasmiles
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Joined: 6/26/2006 Status: offline
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Hi Adam, i just reviewed Your profile, as requested. In the interest of helping, i'll focus on what i think could be improved, since everyone's personal style, is just that...their own personal style. The first paragraph could be tightened up. It appears to me that You seek a sub, then prefer a slave, but are also open to a "regular" relationship. Does that mean vanilla? It leads me to believe You haven't figured out what exactly You're looking for, but up for anyone who's interested in You. i realize that sounds a little harsh and others may not read it that way at all....again, just hoping to be helpful. Secondly, You "love" or 'like' just about every topic under the sun. It may feel a little challenging to a new person. Perhaps a few select important ones could be listed with an invitation to the reader to discover what the two of you might have in common. Some mystery is a good thing but too much and You could come across as secretive. i'm certain You will find a balance between the two. The pics are great, btw! Best wishes for Your journey....and happy hunting! slave sara in service to Master Dutch
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